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Reviews for Just This Once

By : Yaoigirl69
  • From Leeana69 on January 09, 2009
    Poor Ed. D:
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  • From AmethystEyedKoneko on January 20, 2008
    Apology accepted! :) The plot thickens! Someone is spying on Ed and Al, Maes has things to tell Roy, and Roy is most assuredly falling for Ed! Oooh! exciting! :) You did a really good job with Al. Everything he said was something Ed needed to hear and consider. Ed seems to have an answer to all of Al's arguments tho and it's not like Al could really stop Ed anyway! :) Roy did tell Ed to think things thru and that's just what Al is making Ed do. Ya gotta love Al for that! :)

    Medes. @_@ whew! I haven't been exposed to that much history since high school! (Trust me. That was a long time ago! :D) I did catch something about Aryans tho. Aryans = Aryan race = Thule Society = vague movie reference. Yeah, I know it's a stretch but that's the train of thought I had. :) I'm curious as to how any of all that will play into where Ed and Al are going if at all. Hooray for the unplanned plot!! :D
    Update soon!
    Koneko =^.^=
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  • From AmethystEyedKoneko on August 17, 2007
    Oh man! I hate that everything got deleted like that. Stuf happens tho. :) Anyway, love what's going on so far! :) Poor Ed had worked himself into a terrible state! :) Roy, for all his protesting, is totally into this! My favorite line was when he called himself a "hopeless hedonist"! too true!! :D It was very sweet that the "one more memory" Ed asked for was nothing more than a hug. It made me feel a little sad that something so simple and ordinary, something a lot of people take for granted, would mean so much to him. It just emphasized the fact that Ed's been alone for far too long. The time spent on this mission will only strengthen Ed's determination to be with Roy. Ed wants what he wants and goes after it no holds barred. :) I'm curious about Roy tho. Is he just infatuated (i.e. in lust) with Ed or will he discover that he actually loves him? The thrill of getting caught does add a certain spice to their relationship! :) It'll be interesting to see if their relationship can survive the pressure of constantly having to hide everything from everybody.
    Update soon!
    Koneko =^.^=
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