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Reviews for The Unity Arc 01: The Rush

By : tamiveldura
  • From ANON - angel_starlight on August 27, 2012
    Wow. This story was amazing. Your characterizations of the pilots - all the pilots - were wonderful. Absolutely loved the interactions, the banter, and the suspense. Can't believe I didn't find this story before last night.
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  • From wolfkin59 on February 20, 2011
    Ooh.... Such a lovely threesome.... *licks lips*
    Do we get to see more soon?
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  • From hgirl2065 on June 10, 2010
    You should write more....its good i want to know what happens
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  • From wolfkin59 on August 08, 2009
    Well done. Very well done. On the subject of grammar, punctuation, and spelling, I reserve the right to be one of the people who says you've done well and knows what the hell they're talking about. Memorizing a novel with my grandma when I wasn't even 7 had the effect of making my lit skills awesome.
    On the subject of keeping the characters from being too OOC, I applaud you. Great work.
    And the plot line is excellent.
    Since I'm so picky about my own works, not to mention what I read, I tend to recognize anything well-written when I read it. This is a poster-child for well-written fics. And I'm sure my friend Kitty thinks the same about my Naruto fic, Demented. I say this because she prefers to read only well-written fics, and she's been adamant about reading mine, has offered very little in the way of suggestions for improvement--mainly focused on issues that I had caught at one point and either couldn't save or forgot to--and has been delighted to have me read the fic to her, because she says it's even more entertaining when she knows it's being absorbed the way the writer intended. Of course, my reading it to her has a few problems, because I get verbally dislexic sometimes. Said "sarcasm" as "carsasm" so many times one summer...and then the next summer I found out my sis and her mom had been saying the same thing that same summer, and we all found it rather ironic. But I tend to mock myself mercifully (*shakes head* man, that's a tongue-twister...) when I don't talk right. Lol.
    Anyhow, original topic.... This rocks. Go, you. Cheers. And keep these things coming. =D
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  • From Dotowe on December 30, 2007
    Oh my...

    OK, I read the first chapter on...Friday, I think, and I couldn't stop thinking about it so today I snuck away and read the rest of it. This was incredible. It made me laugh so hard when Heero says "Something about a Christmas present. I don't care. Winner dies tonight." And "you deserve the world." made me want to cry. Heartfelt, gritty, an power-packed; I loved it through and through. I thought I saw an "Arc Two"? I'm going to go check it out now!

    Happy Holidays and thank you so much for sharing!
    ~Gloria
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  • From Sapphirexkat2 on December 05, 2007
    That was very hot. Indeed, you have appealed to my masochistic side. yum yum.
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  • From Diane on November 02, 2007
    Eeee lemon filling! Ooo and in a base no less. That's so perfect. I can understand arguing with the characters over something. A plot bunny and I had to square off against Heero and Duo in another fic. Despite Duo disagreeing, I think you did a fine job sneaking that little bit of metal into the beginning and having Duo drop him to the floor like that to release him, that's just too funny. *snicker* Yuy's a cuddler. Makes me want to tease him, but he'd probably shoot me.
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  • From Diane on November 02, 2007
    That story is enough to give anyone a rush. I love it when the boys get violent like this. It seems more in character. Don't get me wrong, I love sap, but it's so exciting to have these two crasing together. The blood play in the first chapter was very well done. The marking was also awesome and I like how you brought that up again in the second. There's no description of the marking though. I'd think it's be red against his skin at this point. Now to encourage you to continue. Please keep going with this. It's awesome. Give them some restraints or something to play with so Duo has his hands free. Even better, Shinigami would have his hands free.
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  • From LittleMustardSeed on October 31, 2007
    third times the charm? or in this case the icing on the cake, if ya know what i mean...
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  • From elementalmoon on October 29, 2007
    hehehehehehe....I loved it! Thank you! I find it all to amusing that they find themselves in these situations...What will they doo when they no longer have the rush of violence to get them together? They are all together too cute!
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  • From elementalmoon on October 22, 2007
    Yay!!!! I love it. I really hope that one day you continue with this...Awesome!
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