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Reviews for Cost of a Secret

By : nomdeplume
  • From SarahTaylor on January 16, 2009
    Yay, I did a double take when I saw it then I was like 'It's backkkkkk' XD

    Love the new update, it made me smile when Ed stopped to talk to Liam and I really felt for him after he'd talked to Roy. He must be so confused, Roy's such a bloody idiot, when he told Havoc to look after him I just wanted to slap him and tell him to get down on his hands and knees and grovel back to Ed.

    Looking forward to the next update ^_^
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  • From ANON - Wateria on June 19, 2008
    Another great story!! Really hooked like I was with the others you've written. Can't wait to find out more. Write more soon.
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  • From radcat on June 19, 2008
    I like how your story is progressing. Glad Ed and Al are getting back to their brotherly relationship and that Roy and Liam are getting closer. I hope Liam gets to stay with Roy. If Roy had just trusted Ed Ed would have been there for him. I reread the last chapter (8) and at the end of the chapter Roy had hoped Ed would be there to support him. Well, if you do not trust and support the other person you are not going to get it back. All Roy had to do was be honest with Ed and say that he was going to get his son...Ed might have been angry for not knowing the truth but he would have been there. Glad that Ed has the support of all his friends and nice to see Hawkeye with a life! Cannot wait to see where the next chapters take us. You are building suspension and apprehension for the entrance of Karen and possibly Roy's enemies. Hope the judge can see the truth....but we have not seen Karen yet...makes you wonder. Love Ed the cat. Funny that Ed the cat thinks Roy is a bastard too the same way the old Fullmetal Ed used to. Keep up the good work.
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  • From radcat on May 25, 2008
    I finally get to review Chapters 7 and 8. Loved the meeting of all parties in the hallway. I knew Ed would not do anything to upset or scare a child. Nice to see how mature Ed is getting. I knew Ed would have gotten over the fact that Roy had not told him about his child and would have supported Roy. Roy is the one not thinking and acting that mature. Still loved the fact the Ed destroyed the pillows. He would not be Ed without a small bit of destruction...he cannot always be mature. Glad that Ed has a lot of friends that are there for him especially his brother and Havoc. Speaking of Havoc, does he like our Eddie? In that way? You know storm Karen is on the periphery. Poor Liam....he never should have been with his mother especially with her level of unstability. I feel bad for the little kid. Roy, Roy, Roy...what are we going to do with you...you definitely have mishandled so many things. I am surprised that Hawkeye still has your back. Do not dislike Roy...he is good with his boy and is trying to do the right thing but can that man mishandle a relationship or what. Cannot wait to see how this goes. You know Ed will have his back when Karen come to town to do battle. With her level of alchemy Ed will know what to do. Plus...I like catEd being in the Mustang household with Ed's old disposition and as a reminder to Roy. Cool.
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  • From SarahTaylor on May 25, 2008
    I just can't find it in myself to feel sorry for Roy right now. He kinda deserves it for not trusting Ed. Please update again soon.
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  • From Kuragari75 on May 25, 2008
    loved the chapter! hope to see more soon!
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  • From Kuragari75 on May 02, 2008
    Duhn Duhn Duhn! secret revealed and I'm guessing a fight to come! Love the little boy, he's adorable. Can't wait to see what happens next!
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  • From MustangsHavoc on April 22, 2008
    So...the cat's come out of the bag, literaly. The cat itself is just hilarious, so is Ed vandalizing Roy's stuff.

    I can't wait to find out what happens next!
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  • From voltaire30 on April 22, 2008
    Talk about awkward... lol They meet after Ed has ripped up Roy's pillows. I can't wait to read more. I have no doubt fallen in love with this story line.
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  • From voltaire30 on April 15, 2008
    Please update soon!! I love your story.
    I have ben absent from AFF for sometime now because I thought that alot of stories were turning into mindless smut.
    not that i dont mind it, your story line is wonderful. The emotions that Ed is feeling strike me to the core.
    I cant wait to read more
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  • From radcat on April 05, 2008
    Chapter 6 is another good chapter. I like how you bring the past back in to play. Roy is rather sweet and loving as a father. I cannot wait for the inevitable meeting between Roy, Ed, and Liam (and Ed the cat). I think Ed would have taken it better if Roy would have trusted him more. Glad Ed and Al are getting back to being protective brothers. Nice to see Maes again. Havoc is a good friend. I still would like Roy and Liam walking into Roy's house and running into Ed. Roy should give Ed more credit. Worried about Karen...you know she is not out of the story yet. Roy may need Ed to deal with whatever her research has conjured up. I do not trust what she will do for revenge. Poor Liam. Hope they make it to Central before the law can catch up with them. Sorry about the twin bed mistake....I got it later after I reviewed. I kind of was wondering what Roy was up to but then again I have seen parents by twin beds for one child so a friend could use the other to spend the night. Cannot wait for the next chapter.
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  • From Loquora on April 02, 2008
    Ahhhh! I demand more right now! It's so good, and each chapter gets better and better. I'm glad Al isn't mad at Ed, but then, they're brothers and they could never REALLY hate each other. Ohhh... don't leave it like this!
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  • From ANON - Baroqueangel on April 01, 2008
    Oh I feel so sorry for Ed but you'd think the others would hint at the truth for him. Writing a bad letter of recomendation, that's not so bad, I was imagining up worse. I love that the cats name is Ed and even though in the anime Al and Ed left it somewhere else, you still had Mustang take it in, well give it to his son, it's close enough.
    Please update soon, this and Nightmare, pretty please!?:)
    Baroqueangel
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  • From radcat on March 13, 2008
    If having a son from a previous relationship is part of Roy's secret then it is not too late to tell Ed. Sometimes something like that for someone in Roy's position can be understandibly something that needed to be kept a secret. Surely Ed would come around especially if he needed to be saved by Roy from the mother. So the twin beds are for Liam and someone else? Or just for Liam. Poor Ed...he thinks the beds are for him. I do not think Karen will be sharing one of those beds. Karen seems to be in something dangerous. Ed would definitely have Roy's back (even if he was angry...you know Ed...he would come around). But I bet there is way more to the story than just this. I can see Ed and Liam warily in the same house. If Liam and his mother are in dangerous alchemic waters Ed would be the one to understand and work with Roy. Roy...what is up with you? Hope Ed does not leave before they arrive from the East. And I really hope Ed and Al can work things out. See...Al is still there for Ed no matter what. I cannot wait for more of the story to unfold.
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  • From squallstorm on March 12, 2008
    O_O... I could feel the 'daddy' coming but it was still shocking! Whew, I hope Roy gets over himself and will talk to Ed!!

    kiki
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