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Reviews for As the Ruins Fall

By : Skydark1
  • From minaaaaaaaa on April 09, 2008
    mixed feelings. LOVED LOVED LOVED most of chapter. roy getting all horny after being mr 'lets take this slow' cracked me up and ed wating to 'submit new data' for the bi monthly report... LMAO. classic ed.

    All in all roy just seemed so passive, it felt kinda like he was doing what ed wanted bc ed comes first, which is fine, buutt the 'fire' he had at the start seemed to be gone. I suppose it could have come back during the actual act, but i glossed over that part lol so i could be wrong. OR i could just be overanalysing. Bah! I'll leave you in peace now.

    p.s. and ed was 'bigger' too? *eyebrow*
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  • From SarahTaylor on April 06, 2008
    I love this story, I love Ed and Al when they argue and the fact that Ed has a pros and cons list is just too funny. There were times when I couldn't stop laughing, like when Al said he'd have to be extra straight to make up for Ed. I read this after reading chapter 3 for Candor and I'm so impressed with how you go from onee extreme to the other. Please update soon.
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  • From minaaaaaaaa on April 05, 2008
    such a sweet ending aahhh :)

    i just KNEW that ed/al convo was going to be one for the books lol al was so completely and totally clueless ab where ed was going with the convo LOL 'is she having dinner with us and the general?' hahahahahaha oh al And of course i was gasping for breath at the al having to be etra straight for the both of them 'what does that even mean?!' 'i dont know!' LMAO

    killer.
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  • From minaaaaaaaa on April 05, 2008
    as my review for this chapter went bye bye after u deleted the separate one, i'll review it again :)

    i LOVE stir crazy holed up Ed lol he slays me. even reading this over i was cracking up again. The whole wanting to have a home cooked meal ready for roy followed by the 'wait. wat the HELL am i doing moment' was simply tooooo funny :D

    yay! off to read 3rd chap now
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  • From minaaaaaaaa on March 01, 2008
    *applauds* I LOVE THIS STORY You may notice i'm currently reading several of ur fics lol, i loved candor and i thought 'mmm lets see wat else they've written' and it's just so good! I honestly thought this one was gonna have a sad ending, but it held such a kind of quiet happiness. you are an amazing writer. off to read the sequel!
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  • From Loquora on February 19, 2008
    Really well written as always. I want to know whether they can make it work or not. If they've waited 10 years some things might have been built up in their minds that aren't going to end up being true. But as long as they're together, that's all I care about. Good work, as usual!
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  • From Yuukichan on February 13, 2008
    Is there going to be more? I certainly hope so. This story has the potential to really go somewhere. I hope that you follow it to it's grand conclusion. I just love your epic stories, and even if this one doesn't have as many chapters as the others, I hope it keeps going for a while.
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