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Reviews for Closing the Distance Between Us

By : Clutterbilly67
  • From AmethystEyedKoneko on December 11, 2008
    Yay! What a great ending! Don't scare me like that making me think they were breaking up! jeez! :)
    I can't wait to see the sequel!
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  • From AmethystEyedKoneko on October 28, 2008
    My only question now is how are Roy and crew going to find the new hideout before all hell breaks loose with these chimeras! :) Do these chimeras have anything to do with the creation of the Philosopher's Stone or did Lust, Envy, and Gluttony just partner up with this crazy alchemist just for the hell of it to cause Roy, Ed, and crew trouble? I'm curious about how Ed will handle having Al back. It would be nice if Ed and Al could live at Roy's place but it would be damned awkward for Roy and Ed to have sex with Al in the next room! :D Ed being carried bridal style by Roy was so cute! Ed snuggling in Roy's lap in the car home was just plain adorable! very OOC for Ed but also very sweet! :)
    Update soon!
    Koneko =^.^=
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  • From XanderRAWKS on October 22, 2008
    This is totally amazing. -gooseflesh- I love RoyxEd! Moar! Moar! >w
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  • From AmethystEyedKoneko on October 22, 2008
    Wow! I had almost forgotten about this story! What a nice surprise to see it updated at last! :D Actually, I had to go back and reread this to remember what was going on before the update. It was a nice build up to the nice little lemon in this chapter! :) I'm guessing that the danger lurking around them is the homunculi. Those three seem to want Ed for some specific purpose. This is starting to sound a bit like the manga! cool! Can't wait to read more! :D
    Koneko =^.^=
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  • From AmethystEyedKoneko on June 25, 2008
    *giggle* Ed is just so darn cute when he's all embarrassed! I can't blame him tho. I bet Roy smells delicious! :) Is there any chance that Ed will find info on the Philosopher's Stone while they're chasing these chimeras? What will Al do when he comes back and finds Ed has moved in with Roy? I know he won't want to move in with Roy and Ed and he probably won't want to stay in the dorms by himself. Poor guy's kinda stuck isn't he? I'm sure they'll work something out tho! :) It's very sweet how Roy and Ed don't want to tell others about themselves until they are ready just so they can have each other to themselves! A little selfishness isn't necessarily a bad thing! :D
    Update soon!!
    Koneko =^.^=
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  • From AmethystEyedKoneko on May 13, 2008
    "I know that we are going to have to talk about this afternoon, but that can wait until after lunch. Now it’s time to eat." *snerk* That's Ed! Nothing comes between him and a meal! XDD Roy and Ed are just too cute together!! :) I wouldn't be too surprised if Ed's running out of the office like he did raised some questions at work. The way Roy chased after Ed reminded me of the doujinshi Hermaphrodite 8. Ed ran as fast as he could to get away from Roy to no avail. He even pulled a spike out of the top of the train to stop Roy and was none too happy when Roy caught him. In the end tho, it all worked out for the best! :) I hope Roy and Ed can work it out here too!
    Update soon!
    Koneko =^.^=
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  • From AmethystEyedKoneko on March 23, 2008
    LOL! If sex with Roy Mustang is punishment, then punish me right now baby! XD Nice to see that being back home hasn't changed these two one bit! :) They're hornier than ever now! :D Can't wait to read more! I can't help but wonder how long they will be able to keep this little affair a secret or if they even will.
    Update soon!
    Koneko =^.^=
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  • From AmethystEyedKoneko on March 15, 2008
    Great story so far!! It was so funny when Mustang dropped his towel giving Ed an eyeful! A nice little glimpse of something to look forward to! :D General Jay is a complete jerk. Glad we don't have to hear from him again. Roy's and Ed's new relationship will truly be tested now that they're headed home. It's one thing to be in love and able to express that love around people who don't know you. It's another to do that around people who do. Can't wait to see how everybody else reacts (assuming Roy and Ed tell anybody!) and how things will change for them!!
    Update soon!
    Koneko =^.^=
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  • From Merkswinter on March 12, 2008
    Cute story! I love Roy forgetting about his towel, that made me chuckle. Please update soon!
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  • From SarahTaylor on March 04, 2008
    I like this story, you portray the characters well, and I can't wait to see what happens between Ed and Roy, see if they can manage a relationship without killing each other. Thank you for posting.
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