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Reviews for Fullmetal Fun

By : Merkswinter
  • From bluedragonkai on September 06, 2010
    JHDLFJKHASDFJASDLKFJASD;FLKJAS;DFJKASD;FJKSAD;LFKJAS;DLKFJAS;DLKFJ *with big puppy dog eyes* when's the next chapter comming out?
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  • From Leeana69 on January 09, 2009
    Making out in a bathtub = hot and clean fun.

    And OH NOES!! The colonel is a big moron. ;_;
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  • From Leeana69 on January 09, 2009
    Oh no, a healthy chunk of angst. XDDDD
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  • From AmethystEyedKoneko on June 09, 2008
    Well, Roy really screwed up didn't he? :D What was he thinking running out on Ed like that? That couldn't have gone worse for him if he tried! XD Can't wait to see how he tries to explain himself now that Ed's found him! Riza was really good here. Roy needed someone to knock some sense in his head! :D
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  • From SarahTaylor on May 26, 2008
    Don't worry about the slow update, I've waited a month before when I updated and yes it made me feel crappy but sometimes it can't be helped. I love how Riza talks to Roy out of the office, just one friend to another and Roy really did need a good telling off. After all he left an ill Ed in a bath all alone and naked, who in their right mind would do that? XD
    Update at your lesiure, I'm not going anywhere, I like the story too much :)
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  • From MethinksBinks on April 08, 2008
    I like it, I like the way the scene in chapter 4 went, with Roy sort of zoning out, and Ed in a round about way admitting he loves Roy (in the Narration).
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  • From SarahTaylor on April 05, 2008
    You can't leave it there, you must update, now, please...
    This chapter was great, it's not moving too fast it's just a good steady pace.
    See, good comment, now can I have the next chapter???
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  • From minaaaaaaaa on April 05, 2008
    me likey. me likey, want MOOORRRREEE rrraaarrg *foams at mouth* hehe good job. the bathroom scene certainly was hot
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  • From AmethystEyedKoneko on March 24, 2008
    "I had to pick! And I chose the military! I chose the military, I chose you over Al!" *hugs you* Thank you, thank you, thank you, thank you for letting Ed be selfish for once and choose his own happiness over Al's!!! :D You have no idea how happy that made me!!! WHEEE!!! *happy dances* That doesn't happen anywhere near enough for Ed! And seriously, it's not like Al will hate him and never forgive him. Al doesn't hold grudges like that. If you ask me, it was pretty damn selfish of Al to even suggest such a thing! Choose me or else? Jeez! Possessive much? :) I know Al doesn't know about Roy and Ed being together, but to ask Ed to give up his career, the only way of life he's ever known, is asking way too much. Where would they be without the military anyway? *sigh* Obviously Al's not thinking clearly.

    The fight scene was great! "DON’T CALL ME SMALL!" LMAO!! Even when delirious with fever Ed still reacts to being called small!! XD Very much looking forward to the bubbles and nice big hot bathtub!! :D
    Update soon!
    Koneko =^.^=
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  • From minaaaaaaaa on March 21, 2008
    ok i'm glad u made ed snap out of his stupor for that moment b/c i was really saying to myself... in the rain.. roy? lol HE better hide behind ED!
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  • From SarahTaylor on March 21, 2008
    The second that guy called him small, I just knew nothing would stop Ed kicking the crap out of them. Can't wait for bath time, that should be fun to read.
    Sorry I wanted you to be sick, I just wanted more of the story :) Forgive me :P
    Update soon please.
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  • From radcat on March 14, 2008
    I think you are doing a good job with your first FMA story. What a cliffy you left us at the end of chapter 2. Hope Roy goes after Fullmetal in the raging storm to drag him back to their....I mean...Roy's home. Hope the animals are alright.
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  • From AmethystEyedKoneko on March 14, 2008
    :D Oh boy. Way to go Ed! Open mouth, insert foot, chew vigorously! LOL! Will Roy chase after Ed in the rain? Roy hates the rain but this is something that needs to be done. If Roy wants answers he's got no choice but to chase after him. Poor Ed must feel like such a fool now. :( Ed was being kinda obvious constantly barging in on Roy in the bathroom like that. Ed catching Roy "getting intimate with his right hand" was so funny! Why Roy still has that icky frog is beyond me. I would have just put it out the back door and bid it fare thee well! :) I'm also curious about what really happened between Ed and Al.
    Koneko =^.^=
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  • From SarahTaylor on March 13, 2008
    This story is so good, it flows so well. A little angst always makes a story more interesting :)
    I love the the bit where Ed keeps catching Roy in the shower, especially the line 'It was bad enough having the frog stare at him when doing stuff like that (those little boggle eyes can be really off-putting)' I was in fits. Keep up the good work, and I sorta don't want you to get better so you can update again soon. Keep up the good work :)
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