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Reviews for Revenge is Sweet

By : helliongoddess
  • From yellow22 on May 05, 2008
    Excellent story!!
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  • From yellow22 on April 27, 2008
    excellent story. I hope you do more stories for FMA.
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  • From Onyxlight on March 28, 2008
    Oh but my... that was beyond good. I want more of THAT Ed as soon as you can type it.

    I will be able to picture him standing over Mustang, laid out on his desk for the rest of my god give life...

    WELL DONE AND ENCORE!!
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  • From Afrieal on March 20, 2008
    **clapping furiously** oh goddess that was GREAT!! that's one we need to reccomend to a few 'family' members that love yaoi as much as we do poor Af just beat feet to take a cold shower with that one and i just sent her partner in to make sure it's not to cold *grin* poor blood-sib has Mono we hope you do more FMA you've got the reactions right on the money for both of them *grin* keep up the great work

    Rysha and Affie
    unrepentant YAOI fans
    who are going to tell their FOC about this tidbit
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  • From KansouAme on March 20, 2008
    Thank you for the wonderful birthday fic my sweet goddess! Best present EVER!
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  • From Yaoigirl69 on March 20, 2008
    That was fabulous! So primal and raw. This is one of the hottest stories I've read on this site in a long while. Very well done. I love wicked, mischievous, aggressive Ed! Roy giving in was just...ohhhhh...delicious! "just looking at Ed’s pretty slender young cock and balls in its nest of soft golden curls had escalated the ache in Roy’s own balls yet another notch." I love this line, just the description of Roy thinking of Ed's cock as pretty...yummmy! I sure hope to see more FMA from you. ^_~
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  • From radcat on March 19, 2008
    Good story. Well written. I cannot believe this is your first FMA story. Well done. I wonder how Ed knew what to do? Is that another story...hahahah just joking. Is this a start for them? Poor Riza....but I do like Ed and Roy together especially in a good well written and plotted story. Thanks. Hope your friend liked their gift.
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