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By : angelofinnocence
  • From ANON - fujinakaheero on August 06, 2008
    so after reading the two last chapters I am quite addicted to this story... and then it stopped and I was left with nothing again.
    I'm sad now, I want to know what Heero does next.

    I really like the POV changes between Heero and Duo, it makes the story more interesting and not so one sided.
    And as I said while you were sitting down playing Pi Story on the computer earlier, i like how the tones and themes of the story are obvious for people like myself who don't catch things if it's not quite obvious and out in the open.
    I demand another... 10 chapters now!! (cracks her whip)
    Get to it little servant!
    (kidding... or am I?)
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  • From Narcoleptic86 on July 29, 2008
    Please email me when you update: narcoleptic86@gmail.com

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  • From Deb on July 28, 2008
    First up I'd like to say how much I'm enjoying this fic. You have an interesting plot line going that's very indepth and involved. I can easily see both guys falling into the parts you have them playing, war does some pretty horrible things to grown mens' minds, let alone teenagers.

    Secondly the person that left the review obviously has nothing better to do with their time than pick on decent authors writing decent fics. No one has the right to tell you what you should or shouldn't be writing. It's your story, your plot line and your right to do with it as you see fit. Let's face it, we all have our own interpretation of the guys from the series and that's what makes this world of fanfiction so interesting. With so many different interpretations of the guys we have a rich and diverse abundance of fics to read. Yes, I like soft and sappy, I also enjoy a good angst fic too. I'm not keen on death fics and it's my choice not to read them. Doesn't mean I'm saying the author isn't any good or having a go at them for writing a death fic. Everyone has a choice to read or not and if, after reading a few lines you are feeling uncomfortable with the subject matter - fine - don't read any more, but certainly don't go abusing the author for their choice of material.
    Fanfiction is supposed to be a freedom of speech and choice - let's keep it that way.

    Having put my two cents worth in (and feeling better for it - I hate flamers) I sincerely hope you continue. Not only is this something dark and different, it's also well written (odd spelling and grammar issue but we all are guilty of those; I know I am!)and I'm finding it very educational as well.
    Good luck to you!
    *hugs and Gundam Pilots*

    Shen ^_^

    www.gundam-wing-diaries.150m.com
    The home of ShenLong
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  • From Eremi22 on July 27, 2008
    UPDATE!!! Please? I really like this...
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  • From ANON - ArienCalen on July 24, 2008
    I'm really enjoying this story^^
    I would love to read more!
    Please feel free to e-mail me if you need some sort of beta (even though I really don't think you need it, but if you want it I'm here)
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  • From ANON - shadowdragon58 on July 23, 2008
    I love it when authors bite back. Good for you; as a reader people need to understand that they contribute next to nothing to the community yes its great to encourage someone by saying good job. However they have no right to put down someone else's hard work. If you don't like it don't read it it isn't like you have a knife to you forcing you to push the link. One of my favorite responses from an author was something along the lines of "chapter 16 to tell me that you don't like the pilots being gay I mean It was apparent both in the first 15 chapters and the warning moron". I myself don't write but a few attempts shows how hard it can be to follow an idea through. I have read stories that place the boys in just about every role imaginable and I for one can certainly see this happening if nothing else ever hear of PTS. I mean settling into a normal life would be rather difficult under the best of circumstances for them and Duo hardly has the background to allow for that as you pointed out. Ah well I still haven't figured out what I feel toward this story but that is mostly because I want to see where it is going so far you mostly just have the backstory set up in my eyes I look forward to hearing more from you and good job on the rant.
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  • From ANON - Mincho on July 23, 2008
    That not true Duo Maxwell did have purpose at the end of war. He went with Hilde in the scrape yard business and live any ordinary life.
    So dear author :angel, Duo did have purpose in this story to move forward in life.
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  • From ANON - fujinakaheero on July 22, 2008
    An honey bear, you made me laugh.
    After hearing you rant about that comment you got for the last few days, I'm glad you finally wrote a reply back to them to show them up.

    And honestly, I must say, if anyone is a big GW fan they would have read Episode Zero, which explains so much that isn't explained in the rest of the series.
    I just think there is too many ignorant people who want sunshine and rainbows in all their stories.
    perhaps they are hormonal, angsty teens who think life is like that.
    Haha oh I can't wait until they become adults and realize life is actually a bitch.

    And this story, to me, I can see Heero and Duo being like that... and not gonna lie, I love an angsty asshole Heero. but you know how I am.
    You know I love Heero no matter what.
    Hopefully the bastard gets Duo to straighten up and realize he can rely on his friends, that it's not a weakness to rely on your friends.... wait, but then Heero would have to realize that too.
    Damn.. so much drama.
    I love it.

    -Lots of luv.
    -->Mess

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  • From shinigamiinochi on July 22, 2008
    As an author who writes a lot of dark stuff and gets dumb reviews for content all the time, I have this to say: it is very plausible that at the end of the war, Duo would return to the world he has always known. Maybe he wasn't a whore or drug addict when he was living on L2, but he was probably familiar with it and after the war, it isn't hard to see how he might fall. Are you saying that all whores and drug addicts are morons? Why don't you go to ff.net and defend Duo's intelligence to all the annoying 13 year old author's who love to betray him as a vapid, giggling idiot who is only involved in the war because he likes making things go 'boom', totally ignoring his episode zero? To the author: I really like how dark this story is without being a Duo-bashing fic. I look forward to the next chapter.
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  • From ANON - Anonymous on July 22, 2008
    I like your story and I hope it has a happy ending. I would also like to say that no body has the right to tell you how a story should go. This is your story and you can write it any way you choose. Heck, you could turn all the characters into water buffaloes and no one should say anything. Try not to take other peoples rude opinions to heart.
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  • From Niu on July 16, 2008
    Poor Duo... will he become addicted? I hope not... it's a sad thing to see...
    And I wonder what's heero's problem... does he loves duo? is his love sick enough to let him do the things he does with duo? maybe it is... and I really want to find out.
    Nice chapter, I hope you update soon ^^

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  • From barrsa on July 15, 2008
    I'm loving this story, I can't wait to read more :D
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  • From ANON - YACUMO on July 14, 2008
    OOOOOOHHHH! You must continue!!!
    I would really like to know waht is goingt to happen!!! And who is going to be the quet savior of lovely Duo!!!
    PS I hope is not Wufei though!!

    LOL
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  • From yolotengo on July 14, 2008
    Wow, great beginning. I really like this idea. It's something that you usually don't see much in 1x2 fics. I hope they work out their problems though. I can't wait for more!!!
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  • From Niu on July 14, 2008
    I really liked this one... And I hope you continue soon, I'm very curious to know what will happen to Duo... I felt very sorry for him, Heero was really a bastard...
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