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Reviews for Big Boy

By : ZaKai
  • From ANON - Harmony Cahill on November 07, 2010
    hehehe...>:3 oh, edward you tease~
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  • From ANON - Ellie on January 16, 2010
    Ahhhh Zakai you tease!!! I normally dont like chapter fics but this NEEDS more. -loves- I love it, its all erotic and falsely innocent at the same time. I love your work. I think just one chapter of them getting it on after a "meeting" like that.. .would be absolutely amazing!!
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  • From Lieriallial on September 05, 2008
    When I got to the end of the story, my first thoughts were "Ooh, Ed, you're evil! Turning Colonel Hottie on like that and then not finishing what you started! So Cruel!" Great story!
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  • From minaaaaaaaa on September 05, 2008
    bung bang!! OMG to de WUUUURRLL! Ed mek it. jah know star, i FELT roy's confusion arousal so easily haha 'im a big boy now' whoo. awesome.
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  • From nightfox39 on September 01, 2008
    astounding as usual, you never disappoint!
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  • From yellow22 on August 29, 2008
    Excellent imagery. Please continue this. It is great.
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  • From ANON - Arimikoe on August 28, 2008
    You can always take something so simple and turn it into something erotic. Very, very hot. I don't want this to be a oneshot.
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  • From Loquora on August 27, 2008
    Very hot, and amusing to boot. I would say this wins.
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  • From ANON - Briryan on August 24, 2008
    That was good! Is this a one-shot or is there going to be more to it? If so, looking forward to the next chapter.
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  • From ANON - Harru on August 24, 2008
    No, no, no, no, NO! You can't stop right there! AH! Mean, just plain mean! More, please? *puppy-eyes* Oh, and incase you didn't figure it out, veeeery nice chapter. Leaves me wanting more like Roy haha.
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  • From ANON - Holly on August 22, 2008
    I love you and your stories. Really. :)

    It's amazing how erotic sucking on someone's fingers can be, hehe. ^_______^ Good job.
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  • From InkHeart17 on August 21, 2008
    That would feel good after slamming your fingers in something. I could completely generate the sensations in my nerves as I read about what Ed was doing to Roy. Good job!
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  • From SarahTaylor on August 20, 2008
    Oh so good. I do love your writing. Are you sure you want to leave that there...? XD
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