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Reviews for As Loyalty Can Be

By : Kimmy
  • From WonderMint on January 09, 2015
    The exact moment I knew I was going to love this is when Vegeta pulled that hair out of Bulma's mouth. There is definitely a lot of presence, of consideration, and self-reflection going on here where all of the characters are really thinking and growing rather than moving on from one event to another. It's like a hot summer where all you can hear for your thoughts are the cicadas and time flows like warm molasses, and you never know if you need it to be faster or slower. That's a pretty heady mix to capture and a lot of depth of interaction between living characters. Quite a feat indeed.
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  • From KeiMaxwell on October 01, 2012
    Very nice story. Like the sad and thoughtful sides of Vegeta and Goku. Off to the sequel now, as I'm really curious about that! :D
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  • From mjmusiclover on July 12, 2011
    ahh awesome, stuff a bit difficult to read because of some edits, but the fic was really good though :D
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  • From ANON - Moe on January 23, 2011
    OH MY GOD. THIS FIC. IT IS SO GOOD. SOOOOO GOOOOOOOD *___*

    This is exactly what I've been wanting to read between these two, and you nailed it. Their really tentative friendship/rivalry thing giving way to something more, and both of them reacting in a totally in-character manner (Goku! So happy and eager and excited for the next big adventure! And Vegeta being so standoffish and prickly but also ready to see where things lead). And you got the surrounding cast down perfectly as well (I really liked the Bulma and Vegeta interaction, they are a couple I am just as fond of as I am the main pairing). You did a really nice job creating a very deep level of intimacy between Goku and Vegeta without there being any actual physical intimacy, it was very believable and touching. Thank you so much for writing this! It made my day!!
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  • From PrismaKakkerra on January 16, 2010
    This literally killed me on the inside...killed me. Good till the end...and then I died. Waiting is forever...*sigh* Job well done.
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  • From michellegaeta on December 27, 2009
    I cant say how much I really enjoyed this bit of fiction....everything word was used so well with such meaning... you could taste the bitter sweetness of it all.... delicious....
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  • From ANON - topbear on December 22, 2009
    I love your writing, esp. goku's train of thought. It is so detailed and real. However, in the end his attitude change was a bit fast and abrupt. i.e. suddenly fall in love with Vegeta and ignored chichi. I was a bit disappointed. But all in all a good story.
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  • From Zofo on December 08, 2009
    Well I'm disappointed that Vegeta went back to Bulma but slightly cheered up that they might get together in time.

    Now to track down that other story of yours to see if they do :)
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  • From Zofo on May 20, 2009
    This is such an emotional story, i really love how you bringing them together slowly.

    But oh no! Bulma wants to get back with him. Hope their new found feelings towards each other will make Vegeta refuse her and choose Goku instead. I see heartache ahead :(
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  • From ANON - Susie Q on February 06, 2009
    This is excellent! Your characterizations are pitch-perfect. Please continue to update.
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  • From ANON - Anon on February 05, 2009
    I don't know if I had reviewed this story yet, but I am always checking for updates. I was excited to see chapter 5. This is a great fanfic. You have written Vegeta amazingly, showing a side of him that is usually skimmed over after the Buu saga. Really awesome. I love the relationship between him and Bulma, as well as the newest emotions between Vegeta and Goku, too. I can't wait for the next chapter. I'm anxious to see vegeta change even more.
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  • From Sigart on February 05, 2009
    Vegeta's reflections are excellent. Marvelous in fact. You got him down to a t, I think.

    Really looking forward to the next chapter.
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  • From ANON - Peya Luna on November 18, 2008
    very interesting! vegeta with some sort of midlife-crisis, thats definitely a new concept, yet the way you´re writing it its believable. good work!
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  • From princelouis on November 17, 2008
    sqWEEE!!!!!!!
    love it! your writing style is my favvy.
    keep it up, i would like to know where this leads...
    =D
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  • From DarkSerapha on October 12, 2008
    It's only about three weeks left until the deadline, but I thought I'd link you anyways: http://www.darkserapha.de/challenge/index.htm
    Maybe you'd like to participate? I'd love to see an entry by you!
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