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Reviews for Demon In the Design

By : antilogicgirl
  • From ANON - Amethyst-eyed Koneko on November 11, 2008
    My my! Ed took that surprisingly well! I figured there would be much more destruction from Ed when he finally heard the truth. I honestly thought Roy would come away from his confession with several broken bones. I'm really very surprised that Roy confessed at all actually. I guess since he chose such a difficult thing to hide the truth about for long he really had no choice. He deserves the pain and remorse he's feeling for being such an idiot to begin with. It would serve him right if Ed had even less respect for him now than he ever did before. Trust is a very fragile thing. Once it's broken, it is very difficult to repair, if at all. Can't wait to read more!! :)
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  • From SarahTaylor on November 10, 2008
    Good chapter, I'm really enjoying this story, and I got a happy feeling when Ed broke Roy's hand XD

    Granted I love these two as a pair but Roy so deserved that.
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  • From SarahTaylor on November 06, 2008
    I think I'm going to enjoy finding out what Ed does to Roy when he learns the truth XD. Brilliant start, can't wait for more.
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  • From ANON - Amethyst-eyed Koneko on November 06, 2008
    *glares at Roy* Why you sorry sonofabitch! That is just pure raw evil! Oooh you are sooo going to pay when the truth comes out about this one! grrrr! :)
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  • From ANON - radcat on November 05, 2008
    Oh, Mustang is being too too EVIL! Ed and Trisha and Al must be avenged. I cannot believe Roy would do such a thing. Ed and especially Al will never forgive him. (Riza too! and Maes!). You really need to finish this and Roy needs to get his comeupance. Bad Bad Roy!! Ed really needs to get even and I hope members of the FMA gang help him. Cannot wait to see the next installment.
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