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Reviews for Pastime Disasters

By : Sleepingstep
  • From greedxed on July 20, 2010
    It's been forever but please say this will be updated and you'll finish it. Because it has so much potientla and it seems it wil be epic
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  • From Leeana69 on January 09, 2009
    OH NOES!!

    How am I supposed to throw things at people and scream 'You've been ROYED!!' when the couple won't behave like their supposed to?

    Great fic. :D
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  • From AmethystEyedKoneko on January 01, 2009
    *wibbles* Oh man. Roy was seriously harsh! ouch. That had to be the most vicious thing I've ever heard Roy say! *kicks evil Roy* ;_; That last line, "After that, Edward didn’t wait for Roy in the mornings any more", broke my heart! T_T I don't know how he'll do it, but I hope Ed can find a way to fix this mess. :(
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  • From SarahTaylor on December 31, 2008
    Aw Ed :(

    I can understand why Roy was angry but I still wanna smack him upside the head :)

    He upset Ed and that is just not allowed, looking forward to more XD
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  • From AmethystEyedKoneko on December 26, 2008
    Roy and Ed are just too cute! I love it when these two bicker! Too bad that's all they've done so far to the point that they can't just talk to one another. You've got your work cut out for ya with this one, Edo! :)

    Can I just suggest you work on your formatting here. This shows as one big long piece of text with no breaks that's really difficult to read. You need to break this into some paragraphs to make it easier to read.

    Good luck! Looking forward to more! :)
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  • From SarahTaylor on December 24, 2008
    That was sweet and funny.

    Just the thought of Roy running laps around the building is funny. It really made me smile XD
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