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Reviews for Cognitive Dissonance

By : Robyn
  • From Lorichelle87 on June 20, 2011
    This... is easily the hottest thing I have ever read in my entire life! Very well written but so wrong and naughty on so many levels which only made it that much more awesome! *pantpantthud*

    Ok, I hope you know, this calls for a sequel............................ ^_^
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  • From TrinityFromtheEraofBlood on January 10, 2010
    ohhh ho ho yes!!!! very awsomeness!!! i love Goku and Gohan pairings its my fav along with Minato and Naruto oh yes something about the young ones screaming daddy is fun to read lol thanks for posting muchly appriciated hehehehe
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  • From TrinityFromtheEraofBlood on August 22, 2009
    WHOAH!!!!!! Hella lot of amazingness in this im so happy one of my favorite pairings and super rare too lol nobody writes about this pair lol is there a part 2??? thats just how good it is..........BE PROUD LOL BUWAHAHAHAHAHA
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  • From ANON - Kurok on March 03, 2009
    Ahahaha, so good, and now revenge! I like where this is going...
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  • From Jennji on January 30, 2009
    Oh dear. I think you may have written my favorite Goku/Gohan/Vegeta story. Bravo.
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  • From DetoxAngel on January 24, 2009
    Macha, you have delivered again, baby! Lovely story, just....Bra-feakin-vo! I love it! Mmm mm mm! Yummy! I now have a mind to write a G/Gh/V fic.
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  • From ANON - avril27 on January 08, 2009
    Great story.I would love to read about what Goku and Gohan were doing the two days they were missing.
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  • From Zofo on January 06, 2009
    Very good despite the incest though it begs a sequel.

    Personally I think they should thank Vegeta as it did them both the world of good, but not before playing with him a little :)
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  • From TristaML on January 05, 2009
    HAHAHAAHAHAAHHAAH Awesome ending!!! lol lol, two days of fucking and planning, just to do it all over again - oh, to be as clueless as those housewives :D

    LOVED IT, i dont think vegeta should be punished though... he should be rewarded :D :D
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  • From princelouis on January 05, 2009
    awesome. brilliantly disturbing
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  • From Orchideater on January 05, 2009
    That was SO sick and wrong and depraved and I absolutely loved it. Fantastic! I was psyched after I finished reading. And it’s funny because I usually don’t go for twisted bondage/subjugation-type fics, but yours was so creative, and it just happened to hit that darned Gk x Gh fetish of mine right in the sweet spot. I was hoping for a more dramatic “reveal” when the blindfold was taken off, but the way you did it was interesting too. Vegeta was evil, evil!!! It was great seeing him so genuinely wicked for a change (and seeing him get his in the end– ooh, double entendre there). And I thought it was hilarious that Gohan called him “bad man” during their sex. If Vegeta was allowing him/telling him to say that, he must have liked the shirt and the title more than he let on. X) The black collar, and with it the title of the most depraved, went to the right person after all. This fic seems prime for a sequel, if you ask me. :D Great job!
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  • From topbear1974 on January 03, 2009
    I read again. I like your style very much it is very intense, and it is evil. I like how gohan describe Vegeta as a cheap substitute. Judging by the height it is probably true. Okay better stop before more pervert comments coming out. I like the emotion running throught the scene: Goku's caring and affection to his son, protectiveness, gohan's desperation fixation, all well described. You are the only one who can make me read and like incest.
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  • From oneswish on January 03, 2009
    oohhh!! please let there be a sequal!!!
    please please please!!

    lol!! this was awesome!! i loved the point of views u used.. perfectly mastered!!

    hey i can dream about the sequal too, so no pressure..
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  • From DarkSerapha on January 03, 2009
    Purely evil. I don't like incest between Gohan/Goten and Goku at all normally, but this was so fresh and interesting that I just had to read it. Still don't like the incest, but I have to admit this is one hell of a cleverly written story, and it does fit the characters, strangely enough. Kudos for pulling this off. That said, can you go back to writing Vegeta/Goku now? *chuckles* I would have enjoyed the sexscene a whole lot more with just the two of them...
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  • From topbear1974 on January 03, 2009
    wOW! I am amazed. I didn't know I could like Goku and Gohan's lemon so much. These two are sweet together, touching to the deep soul. I love the way you describe Gohan's confession, sweet and sad at the same time. I like this couple now. Vegeta you are temperarily out of the favour because you are such a bastard. Glad he got to pay in the end. hehe.

    Again, great coupling between gohan and goku, very touching.
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