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Reviews for Seeing The Dark Of You

By : Blysse
  • From ANON - Amethyst-eyed Koneko on April 05, 2009
    tch. I had hoped that Roy wouldn't screw this up for himself, that that soft cupping of Ed's cheek in the last chapter meant he'd figured out that Ed was the best he'd ever have and something worth cherishing. Shame that didn't happen. Oh well, his loss. Maybe with Al Ed won't have to have sex that is quite so violent to enjoy it. :)
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  • From ANON - sylverart on April 04, 2009
    ...I never read Elricest, but you got me. Damn that's hot ;) And Roy is emotionally unavailable so, once again, nice work! Please don't end it too soon.. :'(
    And as much as I hate to admit it, I appreciate the no sex. As you said, it would have ruined the mood.
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  • From ANON - sylverart on April 04, 2009
    yay!! I love your mix of angst and hot sex :) Thanks once again for the Roy x Ed hotness! I also like how it's Elricest, but not really (but it is). Can't wait for their "talk" :s
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  • From ANON - Amethyst-eyed Koneko on March 30, 2009
    wow! A double dose of some seriously hot RoyEd smut! Damn that was good! XD

    I'm not sure if I should feel sorry for Al (as in give it up hon, nobody's coming between Roy and Ed!) or if I should tell him to just be patient (as in Ed will find a way to work you into this relationship somehow)! RoyEd is my OTP but there's nothing wrong with an occasional RoyEdAl fling every now and then! ;)
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  • From ANON - sylverart on March 29, 2009
    *drool* so good!! I really enjoy your story - don't know how I missed it until now. So hot, everyone is in character, and SSSOOOO hot!! Can't wait to read more (no pressure! I know quality takes time). Thanks for sharing!
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  • From ANON - Ninny on March 19, 2009
    Omigawdzz~! Whut did he say?!?!
    I must know~! Give. Me. MOOOAAARRRR!!! Please? xD
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  • From ANON - katara on March 16, 2009
    wow
    that was AMAZING!!!!
    *suspenceful music*
    what did al say?!?!?!
    cant wait to fidn out :D
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  • From ANON - Fouloldron on March 03, 2009
    You forgot that you gave Ed his limbs back at the beginning.
    Interesting twist though, I wonder what Roy will do? XD
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  • From ANON - Amethyst-eyed Koneko on March 03, 2009
    *headdesk* Oh no! Don't tell me Al is dreaming of being with Ed! No wonder he was so pissy Ed stayed out all night! XD jealous much? LOL Sorry Al, you're too late. Ed belongs to Roy now! *evil laughter at Al's expense!*
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  • From SarahTaylor on March 01, 2009
    I love pissyjealous/Al he's actually really adorable XD

    I would have loved to see Ed's face when hearing Al at the end, I've got a feeling Al is having naughty dreams about our Eddy and the look of shock when hearing it would have been a wonderful kodak moment XP

    I look forward to the next chapter and don't worry about it taking a while, I completely understand about work interfering in the good stuff :)
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  • From SarahTaylor on February 17, 2009
    Can we have more of Ed becoming a man please *down on knees beging* Please, I'd do puppy dog eyes but it would be lost on the monitor.


    My smut filled brain needs to go finish a sex scene XP, later.
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  • From ANON - Amethyst-eyed Koneko on February 16, 2009
    ""Now..." he said, turning onto his side and tugging at my lip with his teeth. "You're a man, Edward."" and I are ded from the hawtness! LOL! Whew! That was awesome! :) I don't get the enjoying the pain thing but the doing it hard, fast, and rough part was most excellent! Sometimes it's good to be strictly business and skip over the foreplay stuff. ;) Not that foreplay and romance don't have a place and are unnecessary mind you! :) *snerk* Ed won't be able to walk straight for a week after all that! XDD

    "Didn't think I'd end it there, did you? Things aren't so simple. Oh, no..." Oh jeez. There you go again with more of your ebil foreshadowing! :) hmm. Should I be afraid or excited? ;) We'll see! :)
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  • From AmethystEyedKoneko on February 04, 2009
    "Will the real thing live up to my fantasies?" One can only hope, my dear Edward, that it not only meets but exceeds your expectations! :D Good Lord, Ed was hot enough to melt steel when he was doing himself! I may pass out when he finally gets with Roy! XD I'm looking forward to that almost as much as Ed is! :) Moar fic soon pleez! :D
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  • From SarahTaylor on February 03, 2009
    I didn't think it was possible but you just get better and better XD

    I should just read one of your chapters whenever I feel cold, I'm not cold anymore!! My dear, that was hot!! I really hope Roy lives up to Ed's fantasies ^_^

    I think I'm ok with feeding the addiction, I just quit smoking and I hear you shouldn't quit too many things at once so...

    Ok, I really think you're corrupting me (which isn't a bad thing) because I couldn't help feeling that Al pretended to leave and was stood outside the door listening and my first reaction was 'how hot would that be' ^_~

    I look forward to more XD
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  • From ANON - Amethyst-eyed Koneko on January 31, 2009
    "There was just something in that gaze that... wasn't right." hmmm. I wonder what it was about that gaze that wasn't quite right. Was it a dark look, one that promised agony and suffering; or was it one that promised kinky delights beyond anything Ed could imagine? If it's the second option, I think Roy will be pleasantly surprised to find that Ed likes it rough. :) Roy obviously knows it's Ed's birthday and that Ed is legal so that kinda leaves the field wide open for whatever Roy might try to do. Can't wait to find out! :)
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