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Reviews for Fate

By : Kalendral9
  • From ANON - DarkDusk on August 15, 2012
    What an awesome story, you have a great story going here, I sure hope you update soon, it would be sad if you didn't.
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  • From AngelNarcissa90 on May 27, 2010
    Please update. I cannot wait to read more! The characters are very relate-able and I'd like to find out what happens next.
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  • From AngelNarcissa90 on May 27, 2010
    "you will be banned a runaway" do you mean "you will be labeled a runaway.”
    "was not very far from his new ‘mates’ side." do you mean "was not allowed very far from his new ‘mates’ side."


    Good story.


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  • From Zofo on January 10, 2010
    Glad Kakarot will get a good word put in for Raditz so Jopher can get his wish.

    Now he is presented to the King, what will Prince Vegeta think of him?
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  • From Zofo on November 18, 2009
    So Kakarot is now a Lord and is living the life of luxury, bet he can't believe his luck. He does seem very happy having mated Comar.

    Interesting that the King wants to bring out the legendary. Will they discover it in Kakarot? I hope so :)

    Who is this enemy, is it Freiza?
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  • From auronsgirlfriend on November 15, 2009
    okay glad you updated
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  • From Zofo on October 08, 2009
    Wonder who it is? I'm puzzled as to how Vegeta will claim him if he is now mated to another, and eager to find out how.
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  • From solitare1 on August 11, 2009
    I really like your story a lot. I feel it's very interesting, and I really hope that Kakarotto doesn't have any babies the first time, because that will make it harder when he has to be claimed by the Vegeta. Then he can have all the babies he wants.
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  • From biboy91 on August 05, 2009
    YES! This story is back! Awesome job as usual. Just a few grammar things. Also I was confused when I was re reading this and was trying to visualize Kak's room. If the rooms are set up like a regular dormitory (a bunch of rooms all next to each other) wouldn't the only possible place the balcony on the side parallel to the side the entrance is on? Cuz if it where on the left side then wouldn't the central garden be going into the next room? lol sorry for the OCD-ness but I tend to notice that a lot. Please keep going!!!
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  • From GodOfInsanity on August 01, 2009
    Interesting story so far. I have a feeling Comar either dies or Vegeta spots Goku, decides he wants him, and grabs him. >.> Sounds vegetaish to me, eh? Well, I'm liking it so far, so keep up the good work!
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  • From kyuubifreak on August 01, 2009
    awesome!
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  • From LadyNarutoChan on March 21, 2009
    Very promising story ! I hope you will be able to update soon ! ^^
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  • From Zofo on February 09, 2009
    Oh Jopher has the hots for Radditz and I'm glad Radditz wants him too :) Hope they can somehow mate despite the class problem.

    Glad Kakarot can still train but I guess he's not going to have his legendary strength in this fic (or is he?).

    Who is Rousi after? It's not Kakarot is it? He doesn't sound very nice, hope Prince Vegeta spots Kakarot for his own soon.
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  • From yaoilovergurl4ever on February 06, 2009
    awesome story please continue
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