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Reviews for Becoming Whole

By : Aestas
  • From Diane on February 13, 2013
    You're bad at PWP. That was totally laced with plot. Heavy with it. Sexy, sexy plot. You built such a rich background for Heero in next to no time. Trowa's well developed even though we don't really know much about him. And lovely little detail to add the exhibitionism into it. Just like sprinkles on a sundae, makes a great thing better.
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  • From LadyYeinKhan on February 09, 2011
    It's not for every fanfic that, sitting at my computer in one of my lazy moments, I spend two hours pouring over the archives and scanning first paragraphs to find that one story I read months ago that I simply have to read again.

    I've must have read this half a dozen times, and I need to remember to find a place to save it or I will have to look for two hours once again. But thank you. This is a splendid piece that shows your concern and dedication not only to the characters and their unique personalities but to writing as well.

    I'm looking forward to reading it again.
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  • From ANON - Narsha on March 15, 2010
    One of the best I've ever read. Great job
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  • From CeeCee on May 18, 2009
    Sexy. Beautifully written. It's so different seeing Trowa so much of an exhibitionist, when I've come to think of him as a little more reserved. Excellent.
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  • From YojiKato on May 15, 2009
    *Pulls out fan and opens all windows* Mhm, that's a lovely way to start the morning. Very enjoyable. You have a great writing style. Loved it much!
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  • From ANON - Camui on May 15, 2009
    ..... I seriously love your writing style so much.
    I kinda wanna fuck your face.
    Or your brain.
    Or your fingertips that type all of this up.
    Or whatever you'll let me molest.

    Because you make me hard. :]
    AND I'M A WOMAN.
    You're that talented.

    And it is with this that I officially proclaim my undying love for you in a non-creepy fangirl way. *nods* If it makes you feel any better I could woo you with flowers and sweets~
    But nothing is sweeter than your writing.

    Osnap.
    ♥'
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