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By : Pixelgoddess
  • From fantasytigeress on March 25, 2019

    I LOVE this story so much! I'm sad to see it stop there but I've read it over several times, it's so good. If you ever decide to come back to it, I will definitely be back to read it. ♥


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  • From RubyQuinn on December 07, 2011
    Love it!! Is there more?
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  • From Grezildetwist on July 03, 2011
    You're not seriously gonna leave this story hanging, are you? I sincerely beg you to finish it - it'll bother me forever if it's left at this. It already has for the past year. It's one of the most exciting stories I've ever met, and so much of it comes from the fact I can't come up with an ending for myself, you have to write it! Pretty please ;_;
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  • From bitemeslowly on April 09, 2011
    Oh my..Oh my! I do believe this is going to be the best story I have EVER read..I'm only on Ch.3..and already it's sooooo damnnn gooodd.. oh my! This is going to get messy..sexy..n oh so good! You're my favorite writer so I should have known..when I seen you wrote this I knew it would be good..but this is beyond good..this is..oh my! haha..mann..can't wait to see how this turns out ;)
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  • From JubblesBubbles on December 30, 2010
    update!!!!!!!!!"!!!!!!!!!

    (you wrote this in FF . Net too, didn't you?

    I want more! Please, I'm killing here with this uncertainty xD
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  • From Zofo on November 14, 2010
    Oh what a decision! I think Yamcha would be happy with it but not sure if Vegeta will. I expect he will go along with it to keep Goku but it seems he loves Goku more than Yamcha, or is that my wishful thinking :)
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  • From ANON - Youkai on July 14, 2010
    So I just read chapter 9? And I love everything so far. I'm really into what's going on and how everything is developing. I LOVE IT! I want them to stay a trio, it'd be awkward, but hella awesome. xD

    My only problem is that Yamcha says 'dude' way to often for my choice. I dunno if I noticed it previous chapters, but I noticed it here.

    Even with that the story is goooooooood~
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  • From RedScythe2003 on July 05, 2010
    Yes! Say Yes VEGETA!!!! Haha... That's what I was hoping Goku was going to do all along. Yay for the update! Yay for PixelGoddess!!!
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  • From ANON - Grezi on July 04, 2010
    Oh yes, finally an update, I've really been waiting for this! The way things are going seems just perfect, I really want to see the three of them together. But it might not be quite that simple... I sense some powerplay, jealousy and kinkiness ahead... Nevertheless, I'm craving to see how they can manage it. I completely adore this story, you write the characters so well and succeed to keep the tension so tight throughout every chapter. Please continue your work!
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  • From Zofo on April 06, 2010
    That's a great job for Goku. I fear he might get too famous though with that body :)

    I feel for Goku, he doesn't want anyone to get hurt but Vegeta is right, and he's been so patient, Goku must make a decision soon. I wish there was another Saiyan for Yamcha :(
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  • From Orchideater on March 29, 2010
    They’re in a bind now! Nice to see that Vegeta is so patient with Goku; it shows that he really has changed from the man he once was, and ought to bolster Goku’s faith in him. Sounds like Yamcha is feeling concern, despair, maybe even a little bit of defiance? Though, they are all handling the growing tension well so far. Perfect job for Goku– I so want to see those pictures...
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  • From topbear1974 on March 26, 2010
    Awww... this is a very sweet chapter. I totally love it. Thank you very much for the good work. I love how you describe Goku's hesitation and Yamcha's dilamma. Now I anxiously wait to see how you are going to lead us.
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  • From animecatlover on February 26, 2010
    I really love this story !
    Goku is so cute..
    I hope you update soon.
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  • From topbear1974 on February 21, 2010
    I have read the story again, i have to say you have outdone yourself. when I just thought I have read everything everything about this two you creat a whole possibility. this is a brilliant story has many depth. I look forward to see how you going to end this.
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  • From topbear1974 on February 15, 2010
    Finally an update!! and it is well worth the waiting. So it was Goku's feeling that made himself felt vunerable. Poor him, all these longing and surpressing for years. A pure heart and frustrated love, something he can never expected to return. I felt for him. I love how your peel out the feelings of him step by step. it is very touching. Fancy somebody you can not have in secret is painful and beautiful at the same time.

    I love it. I love the resolution. I am so happy they finally get together. I wonder how Vegeta views the turns of the event. He must be so happy and relieved too.

    Now the lovers are finally together, how about yamcha?

    I look forward to seeing the next chapter soon!
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