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Reviews for Barracks

By : chayron
  • From ANON - Webtester01 on January 05, 2011
    Wow Toharu is... in the know!

    All of the main characters are lively as of late. Trunks was up kate...

    I've benn busy with work and holiday stuff. I look forward to your next update.
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  • From ANON - WhinnieRich on December 22, 2010
    I nearly missed this latest installment due to the vertiable deluge of dbz updates that swamped the front page.
    It was really great to see some more canon characters making an appearance. I'm sitting on pins waiting for Kakarot to make his (official)grand
    intro and maybe get a clearer picture of this wholse experiment thing and Gohan's death.
    Also, I was happy to see some more growth in goten X trunks relaationship in the last chapter. Finally some intimacy! They are going to be quite a couple (if Trunks doesn't kill him first)
    I wonder, will Goten make an appearance at Trunk's b-day fiesta, possibly at the prince's side or is that unattainable fantasy at this point?


    Oh Well. Nevertheless, I eagerly look forward to next one.
    ~WR
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  • From saiyanstardust on December 21, 2010
    Hey! I really love this story. I'm glad I gave it a chance. I'm usually a GxV reader, but this one is awesome. I've actually been reading your stories for a while, but I have been hesitant to review since it seems every time I review a story they stop writing. Hopefully that doesn't happen this time. I'm excited to see which way this story goes!
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  • From ANON - anonanon on December 10, 2010
    Thank you so much for updating once more. I love the progression of chemistry between Trunks and Goten, adrenaline is an easy vehicle to use. On a random note, this section just screamed innuendo to me and made me burst out laughing: It’s all fuzzy, sir,” someone shouted from the rows at the back. “And there’s this screeching sound.”

    “Just give it a few slaps. How is it now?”

    “Worked like magic, sir! Thanks!” The gutters are my mental home :D Thanks again, please update once more when you have the time and motivation to do so.
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  • From ANON - adeusparaiso on December 06, 2010
    Oh my goooddneeesss, do you realise how much I've enjoyed reading this? Especially that last chapter, seeing the interactions between /all/ the characters (and three quarters of them are OC's!) Is absolutely great! Of course the best interactions are between Goten & Trunks!
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  • From ANON - anonanon on November 25, 2010
    Thank you for updating this wonderful story once more and finding the time to do so during the holiday season. Please update once more when you have the chance, great job! I love the visual of Goten scratching his head maddly in confusion, so Goku-esque.
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  • From ANON - Webtester01 on November 22, 2010
    Wow. I'm caught up to chapter 15. All the pranks and surprises were a great laugh. The accident was well placed. I think, that Goten will have to be more forthcoming to the prince about what caused the explosion; suppressing his ki that much wasn't good for him.

    As always I love your work. Till next time.
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  • From ANON - L. Fantasy on November 18, 2010

    Trunks is such a perve. :-)
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  • From ANON - NotAnon on November 08, 2010
    more please! this story is quickly becoming one of my favorites! maybe some action too??? just for me :)
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  • From ANON - Anon on November 07, 2010
    Dear lord 2 updates in a span of one week...lol.
    Seriously though, I'm absolutely ecstatic after reading these two new installments.
    Such intriguing developments in Goten's background! Though,now I have more questions than I do answers.
    I seriously can't wait until the entire thing is revealed.
    I nearly fell over when the Shaii turned into a peeping Tom. It's now an undeniable truth that he has something for Goten.
    The attraction [and comedic frustration] is slowly but surely building. I think Toharu got it right...if the Shaii could,
    he would lock that fool up on the base forever.

    Your work is as awesome as usual.
    Looking forward to next update.
    Loyally yours
    ~WR

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  • From ANON - L. Fantasy on November 02, 2010
    Oh Goten, balsy little Goten. Why can't he just keep his mouth shut about certain things? He'd lose something I suppose. But asking for a raise that will crack me up for the rest of the day. Trunks needs to learn how to flirt before he pisses the guy off so much he'd actually knock his head off his shoulders hahaha.
    And if it were me who knew it was Goten who salted our water supply he'd of gotten more than an ass whooping. A baren place like that and he's gonna salt the water, boy must have lost his damned mind hahaha.
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  • From Loussi on September 18, 2010
    I was looking at your list of stories and damn all my favorite DBZ fics are there. You are officially my favorite aythor and i absolutly love this fic i am looking forward to see how the relation between Trunks and Goten is going to work.
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  • From ANON - anonanon on September 03, 2010
    Excellent job. Did it for the money? I would have done it for the porn XD Thanks so much for yet another hair raising update, please do so again at your convenience.
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  • From ANON - Webtester01 on August 27, 2010
    Wow! It is amazing how things change in a couple of chapters. Been busy with work....

    I wonder what will happen to them when the shaii calms down and tells them their punishment. The shaii seems to have a masochistic streak.

    Looking forward to your next update.
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  • From ANON - L.F. on August 22, 2010
    Oh boy, Trunks is jealous, how lucky is that? It is a shame about Ranvera though, if Goten has to mess around with anyone before Trunks my chips were in dear Kyon's pile. He's so nice, and a good cook, what saiyan wouldn't love that?! That fight scene with Toharu, let me tell you I was waiting for the worst outcome, but Toharu's a good guy after all. Trust worthy, still debating that, but a good guy.

    Daram and that snakes name I laughed about, I was thinking the same thing myself a bald snake named fluffy hahaha.
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