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By : chayron
  • From ANON - L. Fantasy on August 21, 2010

    You gotta love Trunks, he's just too casual-cool. Everything he says and does, when he's sitting at the desk fanning himself with the papers as if Goten isn't even the room, I laughed out loud. I love the way he patted Goten on the back to ease his pains but only made it worse after he'd failed the piloting course.

    You've really captured peoples inability of keeping from being attracted to someone just because they're heavy in the lime light. Everytime you turn around the Ten has a new suiter, they're not die hards but they still give him the eye. This story is great!! I'm on chapter 9 right now, so I'm dying to catch up to the latest chapter. Thank you again for the best Goten x Trunks fic.
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  • From ANON - anon on August 21, 2010
    oh gosh i love this story. you do a great job with the characters.

    i only have one suggestion: more trunks! more trunks! more trunks!

    that is all.
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  • From ANON - quatreofdoom on August 21, 2010
    I absolutely loved the ending of this chapter. Trunks better watch his back with Toharu around. That kid has a sharp eye and won't hesitate to use people's weaknesses to his advantage if he thinks he can gain something from it! hahaha
    As for Ranvera, it's like he's TRYING to get Trunks to hate him even more. What is that boy thinking?
    These last few chapters have been really great. I await the next chapter with bated breath!
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  • From ANON - Anon on July 27, 2010
    I have been reading this story for a long time
    (and loving it),then yesterday I realized that I haven't
    dropped you a line yet. (O_O)

    Marvelous use of the characters! It's very rare
    that I can find a plot that treats them with dignity, i.e., taking time to
    flesh out their personae.
    Also kudos for the mature, appropriate humor present in this. If I didn't know better,
    I'd say you've been in the armed services yourself. Those drill sergeants sound like the real thing!
    I'm interested to see where Goten's and Trunks' relationship goes. I feel that they already share a bond;
    they understand each other on some primal level. Plus, I feel that Goten is a "half-breed" as well.

    I look forward to each and every of your updates.
    ~WR
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  • From ANON - anonanon on July 20, 2010
    Thanks for updating once again, good luck with beta readers, you're all doing a great job.
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  • From ANON - Dreamer on July 13, 2010
    This is getting more and more interesting. I would be willing to beta read if you ever need help.
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  • From ANON - Webtester01 on July 12, 2010
    This chapter seemed to be a turning point in the story for Goten. I enjoyed the comradeship Goten shared with the Shaii. Also I that scene where Goten whent to return the money to Toharu was well done.

    Regarding your letter, I never received it. I went through all of my email accounts, including the spam folders and found nothing. :-(
    If you would like me to be an alternate beta, send me a message on the DBZ Fanfic Salon and I'll give you my email.

    Cheers!
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  • From ANON - Webtester01 on June 10, 2010
    I can beta for you if you like.

    I love this story.
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  • From ANON - Anon on June 09, 2010
    I love this story!!! I hope you update soon!
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  • From ANON - quatreofdoom on May 16, 2010
    Poor Goten. :( Things just aren't going his way. I wonder what he will do now that he can't pilot?

    Looking forward to the next chapter!
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  • From ANON - Webtester01 on April 25, 2010
    I really like your characterization of Goten!

    The interactions of the people he comes in contact with, really brings out dynamic personalities.

    I look forward to your next update. GREAT JOB!
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  • From kuramasgirl on February 24, 2010
    i cant wait to see what happens next. i love truten!
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  • From ANON - vianne on February 18, 2010
    LOVE this story. Even though you only update every month and a half or so, I seriously check every single day to see if there's been a new chapter. Please don't abandon this story, I'd be heartbroken.
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  • From ANON - kallinite on February 17, 2010
    hahaha That was excellent. Poor Goten! He just can't catch a break. Pretty soon they will have him scrubbing the classroom floors with a toothbrush if he doesn't learn to behave himself!
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  • From ANON - Webtester01 on December 27, 2009
    Ooh it gets more interesting. Goten will soon be catching more eyes.
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