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Reviews for Barracks

By : chayron
  • From ANON - anonanon on April 14, 2011
    XD What an ending! I feel as though I just bared witness to a key point in an epic romance. Thank you for updating once more.
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  • From NekoKoi on April 14, 2011
    I couldn't wait to read the new chapter. It's such an interesting story, that when you start reading you just can't stop 'till the end.
    And than you get to the sad part of it all...Waiting 'till the next update ;)
    But Goten has finally been 'sort of' confronted by Trunks about their feelings.(Not in so many 'straight forward' words, but still, they got the point, haha) I just can't wait 'till they finally give in a little. Untill now they've tried so hard to hold back for such a long time already. They deserve a little break from all the stress/unfairness...don't you think ;) Keep up the amazing updates!
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  • From ANON - anonanon on March 27, 2011
    Very nice. I like the alternate icejin attack on Vegitsei, much better than the cannon, you're doing an excellent job. Please update once more when you have the chance.
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  • From ANON - L.Fantasy on March 27, 2011
    You are so freakin good with fight scenes, I can see them all so clearly- I should hire you to do mine hahaha. I love this chapter most of all, not just for the fighting but the laying on Trunks' lap smelling him thing, that was a nice touch to the obvious kiss you'd wait for. You own the zone as usual ^_^
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  • From ANON - anonanon on March 13, 2011
    Excellent battle scene! I like the dramatic timing of Kyon and Goten on the precipace of a major relationship development, and the attack from the Icejins. Outstanding job! Please update once more when you have the chance.
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  • From ANON - Saya on February 27, 2011
    remember me?? =D=D=D
    chayron you are killing me with ur writing as usual.
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  • From ANON - anonanon on February 27, 2011
    Hehe. I loving these games btwn KyonxGotenxthe Shaii/Trunks; keep up the great work ^^
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  • From NekoKoi on February 14, 2011
    Hi, I just started reading you story and i just couldn't stop.
    I read all 22 chaps in one go!
    It's really addicting, I love the the plotline 'till now.
    I'm a sap by nature so I kind of hope Trunks and Goten are gonna figure something out, but that's for later.

    I luv your writing. It's detailed, got feeling in it and it's easy to read because of your good writing :)
    So please keep up the good work and inspiration!
    Can't wait 'till the next update.

    Greetz Neko-Chan.
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  • From ANON - AmandaW on February 13, 2011
    I really love this story so far it would be great though if you could possably update faster?? I'm sorry its just really good n i like reading it it's just when a ch. comes out every 3 weeks i have 2 reread the ending of the last chapter. (ohhhhh n when do the lemons come in?? i cat wait 4 that even if their both drunk at the time n dot remember a danm thing the next morning LOL im also very curious 2 find out whos ganna be the uke n whos the seme ^.^) I cant wait 2 read the next ch. its really turning out very nice so far ^.^
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  • From ANON - Anon on February 13, 2011
    You blindsided me with this update. I wasn't expecting it until next week. Thank you for putting a smile on my face. However,

    What do you mean Goku's gone missing??!

    Will your poor reader's never find out the truth??!

    And dear God, what an ingenious rabbit you pulled out of the hat with Toharu and Ario. I did not suspect that at all. Though now, thinking back, it made sense why he suddenly became so attached to the Goten. I think, in light of all this new information, this warrants a re-reading of all chapter before your next update.

    On the real though, great work! Your beta is also doing a wonderful job.

    Please continue.
    Your loyal reader[despite the risk of developing hypertension]

    WhinnieRich


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  • From ANON - anonanon on February 12, 2011
    Thank you for yet another wonderful chapter, the change of Pov was welcome and refreshing. As for the conspiracy reguarding Goten, this chapter makes me speculate even more. Please update again when you have the time and inspiration to do so.
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  • From ANON - anonanon on January 30, 2011
    Excellent job! Thank you for taking the time to update once more, I'm anxious to see when Goten consciously makes the decision to recognize the tension btwn him and the shaii for what it really is :3 Please update once more when you have the time and inspiration to do so.
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  • From saiyanstardust on January 15, 2011
    Bah!! Evil Cliffhanger! Still loving this story. Also, I have to say, I really like how you write your OC's. Usually I hate stories with them, but you make it so they add to the story without taking over or becoming annoying at all. Toharu is my favorite, lol. Can't wait for the next chapter!
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  • From ANON - Hannah on January 11, 2011
    Seriously, the best story I have ever read. Ch 19 was just amazing, Trunks's insecurities just seem so in character for him even though they were something I didn't really expect. The same with his relationship with the bodyguard, unexpected but it makes so much sense.

    I looove this story and sit here anxiously awaiting every new chapter. You're an excellent author
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  • From axel2roxas2 on January 07, 2011
    chayron,
    First let me commend you on how well put together this story is. I love reading it, and check almost everyday for an update. :) I really like how you develop the characters. Especially that you lengthen the whole story out, you must have the patient of the saint for you to be able to write such long in-depth chapters. I love your OCs and how you set up the whole government. OOOO...and the fact that elites sometimes have a white tipped tail! I'm in such anticipation about what is going to happen with Goten....whine whine whine, I have no idea what's going to happen. I know that there's some stories where you just know what's going to happen....but not this....and I'm so FRUSTRATED, but not! Gah - so fantastic! And I want some Trunks and Goten action! (not complaining though, I really enjoyed ch. 19...) Speaking of ch.19, I never realized how much Trunks could be really self-concious, but I guess it makes sense. And Trunks and Ealdira have a sweet relationship and it just makes me even more anxious for when Goten gets involved with him. :)
    Really, just keep your brain cranking and you pen scrawling! You're doing a great job and I look forward to reading what you have!
    - albino goddess
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