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Reviews for Something Vanilla

By : IuvenesL
  • From JubblesBubbles on March 11, 2012
    Ahhh, I always come back to read more of this fic, is just so intense and good! And I ADORED the first three paragrapg, saying all the connections of the characters and all that strange and strangely normal relationships.
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  • From TracyGirard on February 25, 2011
    You need a chapter 2. Do they ever get back together? What does other Trunks really think about this?
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  • From JubblesBubbles on January 03, 2011
    okay

    ...

    t-h-a-t

    couldn't be more perfect (I think I'm going to die)
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  • From TheGreatChickenbone on July 16, 2010
    Wow,just simply wow... it kind of feels like my mind exploded and I find myself extremely happy right now. Yet, I want to cry to. XD
    This was a very wonderful fic you wrote, and there's something very deep about it that I can't place a finger on at all.
    I used to be against this pairing, but then you and Veronica both have made me come to love it so much.
    I'm really glad I had found this one by you. It was beyond amazing. You have to be my favorite writer I have found on here. Amazing. :)
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  • From ANON - Nivell on May 19, 2010
    My god..this was soo hoot!!!!!!!1
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  • From anniehdz on April 22, 2010
    *Squeals*
    Wow... just, wow.
    I.. I am... wow. Damn!
    I think I'm coming down from a high, or something, after of that fic.
    I can really only sum up the awesomeness that is this story into one word.
    Destructosex :D
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  • From Ice on April 13, 2010
    Delicious. ^_^
    Why don't you have any more fanfics?
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  • From ANON - kallinite on April 08, 2010
    No apology necessary! I am a big Truten fan, it's true. Doesn't mean I can't appreciate other pairings. Besides, it's not as if Goten wasn't in it at all. XD

    This was a great story! I really enjoy your snarky humour. Some of my favourite lines were:

    "It sort of reminds me of how my dad was, about Goku. Wanted nothing more in the universe than Goku’s cock; hated nothing more in the universe than the man it was attached to." So succinctly sums up their relationship, doesn't it?

    "The happy couple lives in a nice little house that Gohan built, in the middle of nowhere (you’d be surprised how many nowheres we have found the middle of on this planet)" I just love the wording of this phrase.

    "And his eyes return to me, looking me up and down, as if it’s not the exact same thing that just left." Oh Trunks. And he thinks Future Trunks is naive...

    I also love your interpretation of Trunks and Goten's relationship. They leave so much unsaid and yet both are understood perfectly. It's like they only speak to fill the silence because they don't need to voice their thoughts in order to be heard by the other.
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  • From Youkai88 on April 08, 2010
    One word. Wonderful.
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  • From AwesomeIncarnate on April 07, 2010
    Yeah, I think I'm okay with being to blame for this. Feel free to accuse me all you want.

    This is better than mine, I think, on a couple of levels. It's no small feat to fit that much emotion into a PWP, and especially to do it effectively, believably. I mean, I was really convinced that they were feeling it, you know? I think you're wrong, labeling it PWP. That fact right there elevates it above that level. Trust me; I've written a lot of truly plotless smut and I know what I'm talking about.

    And then there's the whole 'first person present tense stream of consciousness' thing, which normally makes me want to find a sharp object to wield, but which you do so goddamn well, and it makes the narration that much more effective than if it were third person...

    Oh, and did I mention the sex was really fucking hot?

    And on that note, for some reason I had to laugh at destructosex. The word, I mean. How have I never heard that before?

    Anywho, kudos. Feel free to, you know, keep writing.
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  • From Tru6768 on April 07, 2010
    Iuvenes....

    Where do I start? You're not here, so I can't hold you against the couch and whisper in your ear that I love you - lol - but if you were, I totally would! *Cough* Although I don't know that anyone in real life can pull off the kinds of sublime moments you manage to achieve so eloquently in your stories. In fact, I don't know if this oneshot should really be called PWP because it took me through more emotions than most multi-chapter works I read.

    I won't get into the specifics here because I already gushed to you over IM, but if your goal for my bday fic was to capture everything I love about Truhan, then I can tell you emphatically that you have done it. And I hope after reading this other people will see what I love so much about them, too :)

    It is the rare oneshot indeed that can bring a tear to my eye (in fact, I don't think it's happened since LMK and that was an entirely different kind of crying), but I'm not being melodramatic when I say that I got choked up at the end. You have what most yaoi writers aspire to - the ability to evoke real emotion through sex - and I was so wrapped up in the characters' feelings that when Gohan admitted how long he loved Trunks it really undid me entirely. Sometimes I get so into their present-timeline relationship that I forget that undeniable little fact. And this was just the sweetest reminder.

    So...I know I give undeserved, overly flowery reviews all the time, but I hope that doesn't take away from the conviction of this one because I really mean it when I say THANK YOU from the bottom of my heart for this fabulous bday fic! In the immortal words of Wayne and Garth, I'm not worthy!

    xox
    V
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