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Reviews for Mind Rape

By : MutantPoptart
  • From PrinceJiita on March 14, 2011
    I'm so glad you wrote a second chapter and I can hardly wait for you to continue! I really hope that Vegeta can be the hero for once, and/or that Goku can somehow defeat Buu from within.
    You have a great way for shwoing the mental state they are in. I'm looking forward to the next part!
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  • From KillJoy2510 on March 10, 2011
    That Vegeta--he's a machine. you paint the denial sooo well. I imagine he'd crack if he wasn't so focused. and yay goku for retaliation (i hope!) I eagerly look for more! awesome job!
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  • From Zofo on November 25, 2010
    My original review dissappeared :(

    Anyway I loved it, poor tortued Vegeta :)
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  • From ANON - Talltree-san on August 30, 2010
    WOW, I absolutely loved this. But it's a great pity this is only a oneshot. I think this oneshot has great potential into becoming a full fledge story, and an awesome one at that. You just can't leave it right there, it has too many what if's XD! Plus it would give Vegeta a chance to be the hero for once. I also liked your idea of Buu absorbing Goku, I knew it would somehow affect Buu's personality with his softer traits.
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  • From ANON - Anon on August 13, 2010
    Well that was certainly not a disappointment! Excellent characterization, even through all the psychological torture. And I could totally see a sequel to this...but I'll leave you to your own devices. :3
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  • From KillJoy2510 on August 08, 2010
    That was beautifully twisted! At first I thought it was just going to be Buu being creepy but by the end it didn't seem to be just Buu there. Poor Vegeta. Great job ^__^
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  • From EvaGreen on July 29, 2010
    I is a thrilling read, i didnt want the story to finish. Fantastic style!
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  • From IuvenesL on July 18, 2010
    This was a great idea for a story, and I think you pulled it off very well. Your characterization of Buu in particular was strong, and the ending was perfect in concept. There are some things in your writing that could be smoother IMO, including a good number of places where you simply used the wrong word. If you are interested in a beta, let me know (there is no intended insult in that - I think I need one myself, just to catch the mistakes that I missed; even the pros need editors). I could probably do a story or chapter this length within 24 hours of you sending it to me (though I suspect that most of the little mistakes came more from impatience on your part than anything else). In any case, thanks for the fic!
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  • From ANON - Anon on July 12, 2010
    Wow...WOW!!

    I haven't been on this site for some time because nothing has really been interesting me lately. I read the summary to this story and was so excited to read it!! I'm am absolutely Not disappointed. Amazing! Amazing! I seriously have not given a raving review like this in some time. Excellent psychological torture. I loved the horror, I loved the sheer emotion, I loved it all. Vegeta! Vegeta was so in character and so abused and so torn. I could never write Vegeta's warring pride like you have. It's fantastic. Definitely one of my favorites at the moment.
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