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  • From sprsteve on December 28, 2010
    This has been such a great story and you've given great life to these characters. I hope you continue writing stories because they are an easy and enjoyable read. If you've published stories elsewhere I'd like to know.

  • From vagetasmisteress on December 24, 2010
    This story is so incredible. You've found just the right balance between lemon and action. I can't wait for next chapter. But somehow 18 has to either survive or be brought back. Thanks for writing!

  • From sprsteve on December 24, 2010
    Intense chapter and a great read. Really enjoyed how you used 18 in this chapter and channeled her anger. I hope you update again soon because that's one hell of a cliffhanger.

  • From sprsteve on December 21, 2010
    Another great chapter, and I always look forward to what's going to happen next. Should be interesting when 18 gets in the action.

  • From sprsteve on December 12, 2010
    great chapter, loved the rooftop idea

  • From sprsteve on December 09, 2010
    Crazy turn of events. I'm not sure how I feel about it yet but I guess that's what makes great drama.

  • From sprsteve on December 04, 2010
    Okay, first off, I love the story and I think it's great. The Trunks, 18 angle is definitely different and I love the creativity and the way you went about it. Lots of props to you. I thought you handled the building of their relationship really well and definitely kept me invested in the story. You did a good job with the lemon scenes, I saw that you said you were new to writing them. The banter between 18 and Trunks is what really makes the story for me. The part where he was eating and 18 talked about her ass telepathically was great. I could so see her doing shit like that because of how much she likes to mess with people. The only thing that disappointed me was that you didn't have more stories published about Dragon Ball that I could read, but I can live with that cause I've enjoyed this one so much. I agree with another reviewer however, in that I'm curious what you're gonna do with 13 since Trunks should pretty much be stronger than nearly all villains that are left. But hey it's your story and creativity works fine for me. I liked the jealous 18 angle too. Just imagine if how jealous she would be if you brought Videl into the story. I know most assume she was dead in this time line or insignificant because Gohan dies, but ehh. And don't be so hard on your filler chapter, I like them, I think they add depth to the story because it goes pretty quick from one villain to the next. So thanks again, love the story, and keep doing an awesome job!

  • From on November 29, 2010
    lol i forgot you had him ware a mask but wouldnt he be weak to trunk's now? or even 18? or is stronger than before?

  • From on November 29, 2010
    XD i know who it is... i wont say who if you other's dont know but wouldnt trunks recongize him?

  • From on November 14, 2010
    i am just going to point out that bojack stood no chance when ss2 gohan fought him. and when king kai's world got destroyed thats what unleased him a seal with all the kai's planets and whith his gone he got free

  • From on November 03, 2010
    Love your story it has action lemon and sex! hehe i realy love it. oh and by the way it said in dbgt that only a pure blooded saiyan can be a SS4. I vote for Super 17 he is still a gt villian that can come to life!!! oh i want to see the alturnite universe goku in his ss4 he gets the dragonballs in him and no one knows what happens to him after his battle with omegashenron.... he could come to this timeline!

  • From Louk on August 29, 2010
    Oh well, I kind of figured those three would be toast after the androids got done with them...but I look forward to seeing who the new villian will be. And btw, I was cracking up laughing at that little conversation between Trunks and 18 at the end! 'Wish for money'...Just like Yamcha after they beat Cell.

  • From Louk on August 26, 2010
    Knowing his so-called "followers", Dolltaki probably ended up in some makeshift prison or something...(evil laughter) As for villian votes; since they weren't mentioned as having been killed along with Buu and Babadi I was thinking about Dabura, Yakon and Pui Pui.

  • From Louk on August 24, 2010
    Come on, seriously? The first try and they get it perfect? Maybe Trunks and 18 ARE closer than he'd like to admit then...But anyway, given the path this is taking I'm predicting that either Rildo and the evil doctor find them or they have to take a trip to M2 for some reason.

  • From Louk on August 21, 2010
    Well I'm pretty sure about one thing; if Lord Luud's on New Namek, then more than likely Cardinal Muchi is there as well...Should be interesting. But I do have a request for someone to NOT make an appearance and that's Doll Taki.(sp?) He just creeps me out too much.

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