Click Here!

Reviews for Survival of the Fittest

By : 2dragonkat
  • From ANON - on July 10, 2016

    Ok so I tried to review earlier....but I think something went wrong... I have been on this site for 2 years and too shy to comment on anyone's stories.....but please for the love of fanfic and Prince Vegeta will you PLEASE finish your story?!!!,!,!   Thank you for sharing your brilliant mind with us 😄


    Report Review

  • From ANON - Gittoh on September 05, 2015
    Urgh I keep reading this story, waiting for an ending ;0
    Report Review

  • From ANON - Riverwolf on July 30, 2015
    When will this be updayed again? Such an awesome series. Please update soon!
    Report Review

  • From ANON - gittoh on March 03, 2015
    I just read the whole series, man its good :) I hope more will come soon!!

    Report Review

  • From ANON - Anon on September 16, 2014
    PLEEEEEEEEEASSSSSSSSSE UPDATE this story is amazing!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
    Report Review

  • From ANON - j-chan on August 24, 2014
    *wringing hand anxiously* Hi again.....umm more please? You do so love making my heart pump...also...is that pan? Cause she's adorable!!
    Report Review

  • From ANON - animeslave18 on December 13, 2013
    ha! they wish for another Planet Vegeta and even it gets blown up. I don't think the Saiyans are destined to have a planet...guess they'll have to settle for earth after all hehe. What have you done indeed. There's nothing but chaos now...poor Goku. How's he gonna gain his sanity back now? Usually this would be the kind of thing I'd yell at an author for, but I was actually expecting it. >.> I was trying to be a little optimistic and hope that the couple wasn't Vegeta and Goku, but that was just wishful thinking. Aw man...even Broly died. Poor Tarble. :/ I don't know who I feel for the most, but Decebal definitely had a death wish since he killed Veggie...Dumbduil. XD Oh wait, that's another story lol. I'm getting them all mixed up now. >< Huh, what story was that anyway? Did you write that one too? :/ I can't remember...anyway, I hope a happy ending comes along. I mean, there's still the dragonballs right? And if those don't work, there's always Namek...right?? :/
    Report Review

  • From ANON - OYM on May 24, 2013
    This has been a well written story. I love the characters as you've introduced them, and the thoughts and emotions that are felt by them. This story has continued to evolve; I like that. Please continue it when you can. Thank you for writing.
    Report Review

  • From ANON - Juniperbreezie on May 19, 2013
    Oh man, please don't let Decebal have his way with Vegeta. And why did Goten try to rescue Vegeta by himself? I hope Goku finds him soon.
    Report Review

  • From ANON - Jubbles on May 15, 2013
    OMG!!! Kudret!!!! Dammit, we can't catch a breath with this!!! Amazing plot twists! Hope to read this soon and good luck with this new job! kisses
    Report Review

  • From ANON - Nancy103 on May 13, 2013
    Really great chapter! Thank you for updating!
    Report Review

  • From ANON - animeslave18 on May 12, 2013
    omg! :o this story's getting crazy...and depressing. I know you warned us in the beginning, but still..I was unprepared. It's too bad Krudet died, but at least he tried to help Vegeta get away. By the way, wouldn't that be a bad idea on Decebal's part? I mean...having the prince in that kind of condition and then using him as leverage in front of the Saiyans...the Bakulans? Won't his people see the damage that the guy did to him? It'll be obvious that the man kidnapped him and did whatever to him and why the Saiyans decided to start a war with him. The guy is just digging his grave now...he's also not very wise. :/ I hope things really do get better...a happy ending is in order...there's been one for the past couple sequels, why not this one? :( Ugh you're gonna kill everyone aren't you? I bet the twins are gonna be the only survivors...unless you get heartless and kill them too. XP Aw that's a shame...i mean, good news for you but, not really for the story hehe. Hope it works out for ya. :)
    Report Review

  • From ANON - Jubbles on April 13, 2013
    Oh my gods... I just HAD to have fallen in love with your arc RIGHT in my university's week finals, didn't I?
    Oh my! I adore this plot! How the enemies come together, the abusive relationships are over, how they start the family, how painful and troublesome was to hear about the miscarriage of Gohan and the way Trunks and Goten aren't always that happy and their own person.

    Loved the idea of having another possible war coming over, even if disrupts the peace of the family.

    Your actions scenes are amazing, the characters are perfectly depict, I guess you favor more GohanxPiccolo with the scenes (^^ not that I'm complaining) and I adooooooooored how twisted and coming to his senses you portrayed Kudret with your cliffhanger!

    I really need to read more of this! And see Goku almighty force brought with the best within him.

    I found you on FF .Net, but I'm not sure if you're cutting your M scenes there, so could you mail me from AFF too? jubblesbubbles@hotmail.com

    Kisses!
    Report Review

  • From ANON - animeslave18 on March 22, 2013
    phew! ok, that was bearable hehe. alright it was more than that...jus as long as no one loses anymore limbs >.> that's just...a terrible thing to happen to anyone...i'd rather they die...at least, 'i'd' rather die than lose a limb, that's just...ugh, unbearable...i would think anyway. after i watched history of trunks...ugh, that was jus...brutal man...brutal. so, vegeta's got a plan, but does Goku? Glad one of the Bakulan's have a conscience. It would seem that some of them would be like, 'hey now, we're trying to reunite with the saiyans, not start a war.' i mean, surely war wouldn't be the first that would come to mind to some of them, but then again, saiyans do descend from them. anyway, can't they...i don't know, wish for the king and goten to be who they were before the bakulans and frieza? or you know...somewhere along those lines? :/ its gotta have a happy ending man...happy ending! >< or you know...a bearable ending...like, 'oh okay, that's a pretty good ending' or 'yay! i'm glad it had a happy ending after all :)' you know...something like that? :/ im just worried okay? jus worried... >_> good stuff tho, good stuff! keep going!
    Report Review

  • From ANON - Kaity on March 21, 2013
    I just wanted to say that I really hope you plan on finishing this story! I have been in love with all three of your DBS fan fits and this one seriously needs an ending! It was fantastic so far and I haven't been even the slightest bit disappointed in any new twist. In fact I'm so happy. Have recommended it to a few friends who are starting to really get into it! Here's hoping this reaches you
    Report Review

T.O.S. | Content Guidelines | DMCA Info | F.A.Q. | Facebook | Tumblr | Abuse | Support | Contact | Donate

Click Here!