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  • From ANON - Djargo on July 21, 2011
    Miracles of freaking miracles,Relena finally got that Heero no longer loved her. It just took seeing Duo and Heero attacked by a crazed horse to get it to sink in.
    And speaking of crazed,I don't think Reaper was the only one off their rocker. Dorothy seemed more vindictive about Heero leaving Relena for Duo than Relena. I don't know if she thought that cutting that rope was supporting Relena in her time of distress or if she'd just gone off her nut but the double bitch slaps*Go Quatre* were well deserved. Not exactly dragged behind a horse but by the time the the cops and rodeo council finish with her she might wished she had been. I also can hardly believe that Relena owned up to some of her spiteful pettiness. She has to realize she in the same boat as Dorothy minus the actual rig tampering though it was her idea in a way.

    Looking forward to the next chapter. It's going to interesting seeing Heero deal with injured,cranky Duo.


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  • From ANON - Djargo on July 19, 2011
    My heart was beating so fast as I read this chapter. You did a great job of balancing the tense moments and the action of the story. It would seem Dorothy's plan partially backfired. Yes, Duo got injured but instead of that sending Heero running to Relena,it only solidified his desire to stay with Duo. I only hope there are no complications in Duo's recovery.

    I really hope Charlie finds out it was Dorothy who cut the rope. Her punishment should include her being tied behind Reaper for a little bit. This may sound harsh but fitting,I think, for someone with so little regard for life or the consequences of their actions. Looking forward to the next chapter.
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  • From ANON - OriginalCeenote on July 16, 2011
    This story is so good! I was hanging on my seat during Duo's fall, and I didn't finally lean back until the ambulance left the ring.

    Too many good things to describe. I'm so glad you've been updating this fic, which is one of my favorites. I hope Relena gets a clue that her stubbornness and foolish pride got someone seriously hurt. You've made me feel strongly about these characters, definitely.
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  • From ANON - Djargo on June 28, 2011
    Reading this chapter had my nerves going crazy. When Relena showed up with those reporters I was glad that Heero didn't deny Duo. He made it clear that he was never Relena's fiance and didn't love her at all.

    I KNEW that dirty heifer Dorothy was going to do something like this! My heart was pounding during Duo's ride and almost stopped when his reins gave way. You really know how to leave readers begging for more. Can hardly wait for your next chapter.
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  • From ANON - originalceenote on June 28, 2011
    GAH! DUO! I knew that Dorothy was up to no good! I was hanging on the edge of my seat for chapter nineteen. I love that Heero tried not to deny his bond with Duo in front of the reporters despite that it could ruin them both to confess.

    Please tell me there's more coming soon? REALLY soon? Pretty please with whipped cream-covered Duo on top???
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  • From ANON - Djargo on June 23, 2011
    Good to see that no matter how self-deluded Relena is she's not psychotic enough to kill...yet. Considering she hangs out with Dorothy and they seem to be of like mind,I wonder how far away she could be from pulling a complete nutter.

    There were a couple of ominous moments,in this chapter,that were worrying. Duo pulling Reaper doesn't bode well. Also,Dorothy and Relena showing up along with Dorothy causual mention of taking out Duo permanently,even if Relena nixed the plan, makes me wonder if Dorothy's crazy enough to try to carry out that plan on her own. Still enjoying this story and looking forward to the next chapter.
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  • From ANON - originalceenote on June 22, 2011
    Dun-dun-DUNNNNHHH!! *cue suspenseful music*

    I'm enjoying this. Dorothy is a psycho. It's so funny that Relena thinks Duo "tainted" Heero.

    Duo's pet names made me giggle. Snookums and stud muffin in particular. It'd be funny if a big, bad bronc rider answered to Cupcake.
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  • From ANON - Djargo on May 06, 2011
    Such scenes of sweet domestic bliss^^. I liked how well the guys get along even if Scythe and Wing are having personality issues. I guess this is the calm before the storm that is Dorothy and Relena show up to rain on their parade or rodeo to be more apt.
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  • From CeeCee on May 04, 2011
    "Duo began to surface from a very pleasant dream, one which involved a blue eyed cowboy, some whipped cream and a large tube of lube." that was hysterical. I'll be interested to see the dynamic between them when they get more physically involved, especially considering the rivalry between their horses, whose personalities are similar. Duo and Scythe are both show-offs, aren't they? :)
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  • From ANON - Djargo on April 07, 2011
    Oh,no! The dispicable two are together again. Individually,Relena and Dorothy are awful but together they create a perfect storm of heinous. I fear the ideas these two will come up with to get Heero back.

    I wonder if it's weird that I find Scythe's and Wing's bitchy,territorial attitudes towards each other funny? I get a tickle out of their inner thoughts. 'What's with the spots'indeed^^.
    I think the guys first intimacy beyond kissing was handled well. It wasn't too rushed or overly intense;just sweet. Looking forward to the next chapter.
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  • From ANON - Djargo on March 22, 2011
    That scene in the parking lot was H-O-T. Duo and Heero weren't the only only ones getting all warm and flushed^_^. I adore how you write these guys together. They're both so sweetly sensual and sexy .

    I can't believe Relena is so in denial;talk about selective memory. She chose to ignore all the signs that everything was not well in her relationship. When the end came,it wasn't her fault but the fault of a head injury. Wonder what color the sky is in her world?

    Looking forward to more sweet cowboy love^^.
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  • From CeeCee on March 20, 2011
    I have hot, tingly fuzzies running over my skin after reading the scene with the boys in the parking lot. Whoo!

    And to quote Duo, "Yee Haw!"

    I love that Relena thought the problem was Heero getting a blow to the head. How funny is that?

    It's funny to see Duo taking the lead so much in this fic, when I always think of Heero as a subtle yet aggressive character when I read him in other people's stories, but they're both lovable here. I hope there is more to come of these two being nice and naughty.
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  • From ANON - originalceenote on March 15, 2011
    This chapter made me stomp my feet in my seat. I love that Relena had a very egotistical, clueless reaction to why she was being dumped. Heero didn't even make a big deal about "I'm in love with someone else" or "I have the hots for Duo." It was just "This isn't working out. We want different things." And she STILL went psycho. I hope the boys don't get too comfy with their burgeoning bond, she's about to upset the applecart.

    But in the meantime, if you wanted Heero to kiss Duo "properly" again, I wouldn't mind... *nudge*
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  • From ANON - Djargo on March 12, 2011
    I almost felt sorry for Relena as she overheard/saw Heero and Duo until her first thought was of how Heero leaving her for Duo would look to others. There were no thoughts of losing someone she loves just how she could inflict the most hurt.
    I shudder to think of the vileness she is going to come up with to try an keep the guys apart.
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  • From ANON - originalceenote on February 17, 2011
    GAH! She SAW! Oh, no!

    I love this chapter with the troublemaking horses and the tension between the boys. Trowa being protective of Duo made me grin, too. Duo needs a spanking for that naughty drink order!
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