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Reviews for Embarrassed by the one I love.

By : whiteonyx
  • From bloodyreign on March 27, 2012
    I really enjoyed this story. I hope you add more to it soon. I highly enjoyed the way that Story admitted to Gohan her feelings before she knew it was him. This story is different from others I've read, too. For instance, he's living with HER, instead of her living with him. And Story isn't related to anyone in the series. And I also really like how instead of incorporating her into the DBZ timeline, you're putting the DBZ characters into OUR timeline. It's very interesting that way. The characters flow together nicely and I love how Story and Gohan interact with each other.
    Oh, BTW, I really like the name "Story." One of my characters is named "Story," too. ;)
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