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Reviews for Sacrifice

By : xerosky
  • From ANON - toploader on February 16, 2011
    The second chapter is sweet and sad my heart is following kakarotto's thought. It is so sad Vejita in the other world died that way without being able to reveal his true feelings. The description of the other world is very sorrowful, I felt so bad. comparing to that the current vegetasai is like opening a new book. I wish a happy and loving life in this timeline, althoug it seems there will be some obstables beofre that coming.

    I love the way you describe Vegetasai, make me like this planet very much and eager to see what is going to happen in this world. Details like the eating flowers are so fun.

    Kakarotto had been brew and planned this for a long time. I am as axious as him wish to see how this turn out.

    All in all a good revealing chapter, solved a lot mistories and preparing for more. Please update soon!!
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  • From ANON - tc on February 15, 2011
    Lol I thought I was on Facebook for a moment I was looking for the like button. But this story is Amazing. I almost didn't read it because the formatting threw me off but I'm really glad I did. It's hard to find good fanfiction and wow. This is great.
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  • From ANON - chichidark on February 13, 2011
    I love the world you've created in this fic. It's beautiful. And the characters.......Please continue this!
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  • From Zofo on February 12, 2011
    Great story, I always love ones written by you :)

    I loved the explanation of how Goku is now Kakarot and what happened to Earth/Vegeta, though it was sad. I wonder how different Vegeta will be without his experiences with Freiza and will he accept Kakarot.

    Can't wait for more.
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  • From ANON - Anon on February 12, 2011
    I realize Goku's been through a lot and so is more mature and not as concerned with acting like a hero, but I was a little worried at first he'd be too different. I like the idea of him growing closer to his saiyan heritage and ideas, but I hope he doesn't take Vegeta for granted after he's taken such overbearing control over the situation and Vegeta's worries from the first chapter. I still like your ideas and descriptions of Vegeta, and I can't wait to see how the two of them react to each other. Lots of emotion in this chapter, and that plan growing near his window being soemthing that fits planet Vegeta is a perfect touch!
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  • From ANON - Hul on January 29, 2011
    I'm intriguing
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  • From crashcrashcrash25 on January 28, 2011
    everything about this story is amazing. I look forward to reading more.
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  • From respiration on January 23, 2011
    Can't wait to read more. This seems like it's off to an excellent start.
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  • From ANON - hul on January 20, 2011
    I like it, it's promising
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  • From ANON - io on January 18, 2011
    I am a huge fan of your stories, Xero Sky,and I'm really excited about this one! I love how you describe Vegeta, and this chapter had a lot of detail on him as well as stuff about how the saiyan race accepted the Legendary and lived without Freeza. You've got such a way of bringing texture to the scenes, from Vegeta's well-known pride and resolution and anger in this new version, growing up knowing he isn't a match for Goku and that he was being given away, to the unexpected detail of the stain used on Vegeta's skin as part of the ritual of getting ready and the King's interest as an artist. Great job!
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  • From ANON - Anon on January 16, 2011
    I'm already intrigued in this story. Vegeta's character and fierce determination shine through in every line, and I loved the sublte insights into saiyans in general and his father's thoughts and behavior. I am incredibly curious about Kakarrot's intentions, and how he'd react to the statues and sacrifices in his honor now, and how he'll approach Vegeta. Claiming sounds fascinating, and the dark history of it Vegeta discovered was menacing warning. Despite how Vegeta feels he's being sold to Kakarrot to be lesser, controlled, Kakarrot's words about ruling belonging to the House of Vegeta and how he is a defender almost makes him sound like he would support and be under Vegeta's rule... But I'm not sure and there feel like so many options, especially if Vegeta treats Kakarrot like an enemy first. And why would Kakarrot want Vegeta? The hints of time-travel make it even more confusing, and I want to know!

    Smaller question, I wonder how much older than Vegeta Kakarrot is? Did he really wait twelve years, or did it only take a few days with his time machine?

    Definitely looking forward to the next chapter, and how Vegeta and Kakarrot will meet! Please update soon!
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  • From ANON - topbear1974 on January 14, 2011
    Oh my god! Xero sky is writing. I am so happy. Why the fandom is quiet for a bit then there are several good stories on. Not I am complaining. No, no.
    I love the story. You have a beautiful start. The scenes are vivid in mind and I love the way you described saiyanjin ceremonies, combine both morden and history. Love the tattoo and the royal family interaction, so nice and real. But I love most vegeta,s monologue.it is so vegeta! It is beautifully deep and comprehensive. It shows the conflicts inside. I can't wait for him to meet kakarott to see what happens. The suspension is killing me!
    It seems the future kakarott came to this timeline to save the day. But what about the other vegeta? You can't have both kakarott, that is too greedy of you. I can't wait to see the update.


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  • From ANON - Skyaze on January 14, 2011
    I really like how this story started off. Very nice writing how you described Vegeta's emotions and I can't wait to
    read how he handel Kakkarot.
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  • From ANON - Julia on January 14, 2011
    Hi!

    Great beginning!

    You described Vegeta's struggles and fears very good. I could really feel with him.

    Please do go on!
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  • From ANON - Rinrins on January 12, 2011
    O.O!

    Do my eyes deceive me?? Is the great Xero Sky posting DBZ fics again?! OH JOY! Oh, I've missed you in this fandom! I'm not big on Vegeta being an uke, but it's YOU so I'll take it! *Happy dance.* Does this mean Trinity may be continued?!

    Back to THIS fic--- It's well written, as expected. Nice story developing here and I'm interested in reading more. ^.^ Welcome back!
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