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Reviews for Turning Back Time

By : saiyanb
  • From ANON - sm on April 30, 2011
    ok this is like scary good, im entranced
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  • From mjmusiclover on April 16, 2011
    quote ---> 'Mj11490: ‘Beautifully write’, yah, that one for all those ditzy dyslexic, diabetic, dirty blondes out there… plus their all too kind betas (thanks Anatra!) Glad you’re enjoying the read so far, hope the next chapter is as enjoyable.,
    whoopsie my bad, i tend to be very clumsy when it comes to typing & i sure do enjoy reading your fanfictions very much, especiallythis, iwould never usually read a seme yamcha/ uke vegeta fic, but this one is amazing & it makes so much sense that yamcha wished himself as a saiyajin & nappa, oh nappa is just an annoying knob, hehe a super saiyajin yamcha definitely does impress vegeta alot
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  • From KillJoy2510 on April 04, 2011
    This is getting even more intriguing! I love Yamucha (sp?)'s aggression and determination--and preparation in the sturdy bed lol. Almost want to read ahead but knowing me, i'll read it all in one sitting and neglect sleep -_-;; I am on deviantart under littlekilljoy, btw, but not much there. I cant find an original file but one of my pics is on pixelgoddess's deviantart, too. Called "Vegeta Seduces Goku". Aiming to redo that one ^^
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  • From Vegetaswriter on April 03, 2011
    I am getting very excited with your fanfic to the point I am ready to deman the full story hahaha I have a great idea where you are heading and I wonder did Goku really did fell in love with Vegeta from the very beginning and in the future try to gain Vegeta for himself arg that could be quite revolving goku,yamcha,goku,yamcha lol on and on it goes. Or perhaps a 3 way mating hmmmmm that could have many possibilities of many genres but any who my dear I am loving the way you are writing this from Yamcha's point of view it speaks and flows good. I also like the fact you had Yamcha go back to 'that' Vegeta. The quick witted, conniving, badass prince we all fell in love with. But I wonder how it will work.
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  • From ANON - Just another reader on April 03, 2011
    Sorry it took me so long to read these next two chapters. Uni had been keeping me busy the past few weeks : /

    But, what a wonderful set of chapters to read this morning! I was wondering if you were going to have Yamcha turn himself into a Saiyan so that he wouldn’t have to worry about growing old again. I also like that you had him train in the time chamber to become strong enough for when he meets Vegeta. I can tell you’ve put quite a bit of thought and time into the plot with this story and it’s paid off.

    I also enjoyed that you’ve maid Yamcha’s Saiyan instincts kick in because even though he still has his life experience as a human, things would be different for him now that he’s Saiyan.

    And he’s on a roll getting rid of all the possible threats. I wonder how that will change the timeline as far as the strength Goku achieved from fighting those threats. I like that he plans to leave Frieza for Vegeta to kill. The last chapter was very intense! I can’t wait to read how everything turns out.

    Thanks again for writing and sharing this.

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  • From mjmusiclover on April 02, 2011
    ahhh amazing :D, it's very beautifully well written, i cannot wait for more of this :D
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  • From KillJoy2510 on March 29, 2011
    I'm really starting to appreciate Yamcha and i didn't actually expect for him to make that wish. I could cheat and go to your site (you are a GODDESS for sharing all the slashy goodies btw and you make drawing muscle structure look like childs play, which it's not, at least for me unfortunately) but i rather like this anticipation of waiting. So...on i wait.
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  • From ANON - pallyndrome on March 24, 2011
    It's good! Sad but in a good way.

    I love it when authors like you return to writing DBZ. :)
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  • From mjmusiclover on March 23, 2011
    wow this is amazingness
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  • From ANON - Yaoiandcoffeeaddict on March 20, 2011
    Love the plot! It's so unique and cant wait to see Y/V if he succeeds!
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  • From KillJoy2510 on March 20, 2011
    Always in the mood for a good Yamcha/Vegeta fic. O_o Pregnant Saiyajins!!! And I though pregnant women were bad enough. The thought of a hormonal Saiyajin intrigues and frightens me...I've never read Yamcha as deep as you put him. I almost feel a little resentful towards Goku (but I would still like to see the scene where he finally claims Vegeta!) Looking forward to the rest.
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  • From Dragon7 on March 20, 2011
    Very good start!! Looking forward to this story it sounds great update soon.
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  • From ANON - Just another reader on March 19, 2011
    Interesting start. I loved the set up for this and look forward to reading more. I like that you mentioned "this Vegeta," keeping with the fact that if Yamcha does go back in time, the present time line will stay the same just like with Future Trunks in the Android Saga. Nice work so far : )
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  • From Vegetaswriter on March 19, 2011
    It is about time I read a good Yamcha an Vegeta fanfiction I would like to see how this all unfolds and please continue the only other one I read the author stopped at the second chapter so please don't stop and continue
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