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Reviews for When The Van\'s a Rockin\'

By : chroniclyflaming
  • From DemonPyromaniac on November 04, 2011
    This is an older fill from ye olde kink meme, isn't it? I really liked the story since Krillin and 17 and 18 getting it on in the van is hilarious and pretty damn hot, especially since it is the 6969 van. I know that everyone was woken up in the morning by other people milling about and that must have been awkward if any of them were able to see the back of the van through the windows. I like how Krillin initially things that he is never going to do something like that again, but it doesn't work out that way. I especially liked the cyborgs trying to make Molotov cocktails in Bulma's lab and Krillin having to steal all the sex tapes. Krillin wanting to help 17 and 18 troll the Z fighters and friends was funny too. I especially liked the part about shaving Vegeta's eyebrows, because what if they're like the rest of a Saiyan's hair and they never grow back? Then Vegeta would be like one of those creepy women who shave off their eyebrows and draw them in with makeup.

    You're also right that 17 and 18 are jail-bait, even if it is entirely possible that they're the same age or older than Krillin. It was never really specified when Dr. Gero started working on his prettiest creations after all. I haven't watched much GT, but I saw some screenshots and I think 18's awful clothes and bad haircut were put there so that older!Krillin didn't look like he was robbing the cradle.

    By the way, thanks for reviewing my story. I think there might be a way to reply to reviewers but I can't seem to find it. This website isn't organized very well and it has a lot of bugs.
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