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Reviews for Void

By : Sephanie
  • From ANON - fangirl on March 16, 2013
    I stopped reading when Heero thought of Duo as his sexy bishie(!), I mean what the hell?! Heero would never say bishie. That's a big OOC!

    On top of that already on the first chapter there's some spelling mistakes or mismatched words like: "tell" instead of "till". Sorry but its just too amateurish for me. Thanks for your efforts but I sincerely advise you to get a beta, for editing purposes at least.

    Those spaces in between paragraphs aren’t doing this fic any favors.

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  • From ANON - colonel badass on December 20, 2011
    Loving it! can't wait to read the rest! :)
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