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By : kallysadau
  • From Zofo on March 11, 2013
    Typical Goku to get Vegeta saved instead of him! Hope Vegeta can get him back somehow.
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  • From Robyn on March 08, 2013
    Careful what you ask for! beta while reading (which I'm enjoying very much) I think you meant this 'had' to be a 'hard' ...become had to imagine there was an enemy out there they couldn’t defeat

    That was the only one!

    This chapter in itself doesn't feel unfinished. It feels more like there are mysteries to be answered, and that's how the rest of the story will get written. Will you write flashbacks? Or will Vegeta's inner monolog answer most of the questions the fans will have about what happened to bring Goku and Vegeta to this point?

    Hope you're still interested in writing this, because I'll be interested in reading.
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  • From ANON - Nancy103 on October 06, 2012
    This story "felt right" to me!! Nice beginnings!
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  • From Secretsaiyancrush on October 06, 2012
    Wow. I believe that this promises to be a great fanfic. I hope that you will continue with this. I am already anxious for your updates...soon, please! Lol
    XD
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  • From ANON - Moon on October 06, 2012
    Another well written and interesting story! I will be following this. I really liek the idea behind it and I have not seen it before. Good luck with your writing!
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