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By : arvan
  • From ANON - kit-kit on November 06, 2014
    Oh no tarble is a bad guy
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  • From Zofo on September 24, 2014
    Loving how Goku is getting all protective of Vegeta's honor and doesn't like Turles interactions with him, now all we need is for him to get jealous :)

    Oooh tentacles! Nasty. Poor Tarble and Vegeta. I wonder if Tarble was a virgin :(

    Am I just being suspicious thinking something bad is in the powder Tarble just secreted away, and he had instructions with it? Could have just been a bag of sherbet but somehow I think it's something more sinister.

    Excited to hear you are considering a sequel, will look forward to that.
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  • From Zofo on September 19, 2014
    Lol that was a funny chapter, though I was surprised that the women wasn't Bulma, Chichi or Lunch.

    Can't believe Turles was trying it on in the closet, obvious the lust is making his brain go all sqidgy! How long can Vegeta resist and wouldn't he prefer Goku?

    Looking forward to the next instalment.
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  • From Robyn on September 16, 2014
    This chapter was so entertaining! I really enjoyed Goku's awkwardness! LOL
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  • From Zofo on September 13, 2014
    Really enjoying this story as I love playing RPGs and often wondered how Goku and Vegeta would fair in some of them.

    Hope you can update soon.
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  • From Robyn on August 16, 2014
    The confrontation with Roshi was funny. Vegeta and Tarble are most certainly not suited to wear women's clothing, but you made it sound like they wore it pretty well. :P I'm curious as to who this enchantress is going to be and looking forward to finding out. :)
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  • From Robyn on July 31, 2014
    ROFL - I forgot that Goku's sword was vibrating! That's so funny! Also, I found these titles amusing - 'Master Roshi, the immortal pervert' and mages have to see 'Elder Kai, the ancient voyeur. :P I like the fact Goku and Turles are getting at each other and that Goku doesn't know why he's letting Turles get to him.

    Goku's vision was of starving children? That made me laugh, too. Too virtuous!
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  • From ANON - Mina on July 22, 2014
    I Love your story!!!! It's so much fun and original!! Where do you get your ideas for Crack? You're truly amazing and I love this group of four. Please continue writing this piece.
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  • From Robyn on June 26, 2014
    I wasn't expecting this update so soon, but glad to see you squeezed one in! :D The interaction between the four of them was priceless and I'm looking forward to seeing more. :D Thank you!
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  • From animeslave18 on June 10, 2014
    Awwww come on! This is the second story you're takin a break from! D: Oh fine. I understand...haven't been able to even write a little bit for my stories lately. Hopefully you get some free time soon and just write like crazy...just don't abandon your stories...that happens too often. :/
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  • From Robyn on June 09, 2014
    Thanks for giving us a lemon before you took your break! :) I understand about RL and how it interferes with writing. *le sigh* Goku and Tarble's conversation had me squirming in embarrassment for Tarble - but it was humorous!
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  • From Robyn on May 31, 2014
    I love all the excitement in this chapter, and the fact they were SO close - and yet they still all didn't meet up yet! I so wanted to see that reunion! Ah well, later then. :)

    LOL - someone sure is taking a risk! (Don't want to give it away)
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  • From Robyn on May 17, 2014
    Goku's newly found outfit had me cracking up! That's just fantastic. I liked the interaction between him and Tarble and that story he told about when he and Vegeta were roommates was very interesting. :P
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  • From Robyn on May 10, 2014
    I was kind of surprised this entire chapter dealt with Vegeta and Turles, but I liked the fact I didn't have to try and jump from one story line to another in the same chapter, so I'm OK your focus was on one set. :) It was fun watching Turles try to get at Vegeta and Vegeta declining, repeatedly.

    Uh-oh! I believe the last character you introduced makes an excellent bad guy. :D Looking forward to the next chapter, regardless of what story line it focuses on. :)
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  • From TristaML on April 28, 2014
    I like this story alot, I'm not even much of a gamer but you make it easy to follow and the stat updates are so great. I can't help but wonder what you're going to do next and I like how you're adding unexpected characters from the DBZ world in unexpected ways! I look forward to reading the rest of this story very much.


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