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Reviews for Seduction of the Innocent Rice

By : GohanLSSJ2
  • From ANON - on June 26, 2016
    New chapter... Come on
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  • From ANON - cvx on March 13, 2015
    Even though this is a harem, I'm still rooting for Mami to win Gohan's affection here. She's like the only one that doesn't have a mate, and, personal preference, the most attractive one out of all the Madoka girls.

    With that said, I'm very curious which Gohan you're basing this with. I certainly wouldn't mind if this was an AU version of Cell arc Gohan grown as a teenager with an albeit different background and the same hairstyle, just like the prototype design sketch (the one on the far right) Toriyama had in mind. Plus it's better this way since the girls would be too old for Gohan anyway, he was 10 (Counting the year he spend in the RoSaT) at the end of the Cell games.
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  • From AFFModerator on June 28, 2014

    Please correct your disclaimer.


    Your disclaimer doesn't have one of the two parts we need to see. It must say that no money/profit is made. Saying that it’s just for fun or just for entertainment purposes is not enough.


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  • From ANON - pancake waffles on June 26, 2014
    This story already started off so nicely and Gohan hasn't even made an appearance yet! There's so much that could happen they could all end up falling in love with Gohan and he could get a harem or something. I really hope you continue this story. although i don't understand why you don't post this on ff.net because its easier to keep up with new chapters and stuff. Some things im curious about is how old is everyone? Will it be a teen Gohan or the older one. personally i love the teen Gohan a lot more than the older one since well you saw what happened in the buu saga. And will Gohan have a tail? i always liked Gohan's tail. I pretty much wrote whats on my mind just to show my gratitude to you because you write some Kickass Gohan stories(my favorite anime character of all time) so yeah
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