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Reviews for Dark Desire

By : Carisa
  • From corrinjade1 on August 24, 2015
    Good story. Enjoyed reading it! Thank you.
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  • From ANON - xvaltheavx on April 24, 2005
    *stands up and claps*
    Beautifully done!
    I have to admit, I wasn't sure about this story in the beginning, but I stuck with it and it turned out absolutely incredible.
    I also don't normally like a first-person point of view, but you handled it beautifully. You are a skilled writer.
    Very well done.

    ~Althea~
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  • From ANON - vegeta goddess on January 11, 2005
    Have I ever mentioned how much I love this fic? Yummy!
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  • From ANON - lafemmevegeta on December 29, 2004
    I love this story. I have read it often,yet I couldn't remember reviewing this one. I just read & reviewed Master of Desire,Slave to Lust and that is the best fan told story ever. Dark Desire was well written and entertains me often. Thanks for your skills. Don't ever outgrow your love for Vegeta.
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  • From ANON - Kura on March 15, 2004
    Very well writen! I enjoyed it very much! ... but now I'm disturbed at myself ... that the First (yes, very first) Dragon ball related fic that I read should be a lemon ... >_>;; And here I thought I hated DBZ
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  • From ANON - Nay Nay on February 29, 2004
    I loved your stories. Please keep writing them
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  • From ANON - Netty on December 22, 2003
    I've recently been reading your fanfic and i have to say it's the best I've read. I can't wait for the next story you do. You write with a style that is not easily pulled off, and the descriptiveness of your stories makes it easy for the reader to close their eyes and take the place of one of the characters. keep it up, your newest fan.

    Netty
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  • From ANON - Karista on August 02, 2003
    My god...NEVER in my life have a read a B/V fic that was so perfectly accurate! I can't praise this story enough...the emotion, the POV, the sex...all of it was so excellent. If Toriyama ever did a hentai story about them, this is what I'd picture it to be . T. There aren't enough synonyms for "awesome" that I can use to describe this story. I've been through more than my fair share of B/V fthatthat were too romantic...everyone seemed to be foregetting Vegeta's violent nature and Bulma's sheltered human life. You have broken the barrier with this one, bringing both together in an amazing mix of fear, lust, and just the right amount of love. I swear, if Vegeta were real, I'd tie a bow around him and ofer him as a reward for writing something so cool. Keep up the good work.
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  • From ANON - goddessofflame on July 25, 2003
    Great story. Best dark fic i have ever read and I have read quite a few. This one beats them all. Loved the way you portrayed Vegeta's unique love for his Onna and incorporated lots of juicy lemons. Hope to see more of your work.
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  • From ANON - Roxotaku on July 02, 2003
    God, if I weren't reading this at work I would cry! This is the ULTIMATE Vegeta/Bulma story. No one writes about this better than you and I will never be able to read anyone elses fic with this pairing because they would all pale compared to you. I bow to your brilliance! Thank you for your stuppendous, marvelous story, you are the pinnacle of an adult fanfiction writer. Ok, I guess thats enough grovelling, but its from the heart, I swear. I will always look forward to reading anything you write.
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  • From ANON - Rikku-sama on July 01, 2003
    *cries big tears of unfathomable emotion* Bravo! *claps wildly* Bravo! ^_^
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  • From ANON - Sue on June 30, 2003
    Wow, super ending to a super fic!!! So that asshole was one of her co-workers...hehehe, he won't be getting a paycheck anymore :D. I absolutely loved this fic. So erotic and everyone was so IC. Graet job!!
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  • From ANON - shaqueefa on June 30, 2003
    geez, that was so good. *geez*
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  • From ANON - kagomereborn on June 30, 2003
    that was amasing, beautiful even, *Crying* *sniff* soo good, you write soo well, it pitys my own work, well i have to go write my next chap. check out my flics if you get a chance i would lov any comments you give ^_^~
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  • From ANON - Roxotaku on June 27, 2003
    I have never read a DBZ fic where Vegeta was portrayed better than this. Your style of writing, and grasp of Vegetas psychology are so excellant they send chills up my spine! I always visualize what I am reading when the writing is good, and since this story was more than good -it was INCREDIBLY WONDERFUL- it will haunt my mind for a long time. I hope to read more from you. Please never stop writing!
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