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Reviews for Finding A Replacement

By : MiNitiNite
  • From ANON - chibi-neko on June 28, 2003
    Wow,this story is good,hope to see a new part up soon and what about Piccolo????
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  • From ANON - Vegeta on June 28, 2003
    One thing first. I completly agree with you, there are not enough Zarbon romance outthere and we need more. But your story is...well...let say AU and OCC. And that an understatment.

    As soon I read Piccolo drinking a glass of milk at Bulma I knew there was something going on. After that, well, the sex scene was not beleivable one second. You didn't reatry try for realist there.

    And the thing about Vegeta going inside Freeza room because he heard noise? heu I don't think so, and I really doubt he was going to lik eit either.

    Then Bulma asking Piccolo to bring towel to Vegeta? Sorry but I just can't see that. Simple curiosity, Piccolo don't have some place to stay, seem he is awfully at home there!

    Two things that I liked.

    The image of Zarbon on the bed and the comment about all Freeza subordinnate beoronoron.
    I didn't read all the story, stopping at Piccolo bringning towel to Vegeta, but I don't think you put many effort into that one.

    But I appreciate the effort, must be difficulte to fit Zarbon somewhere!
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