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Reviews for Innocent Child

By : Jita
  • From ANON - Aelan on November 21, 2005
    Disturbing, but very good. Please, I want to know what happens next. A sequel, or at least another chapter?

    *gives you the puppy eyes* Pretty please?
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  • From ANON - ??? on May 25, 2005
    -_-
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  • From ANON - Naii on January 07, 2005
    why in the world are you no longer a member of ff.net ?
    but sense you are no longer there, you should up date here more often
    your story is a good one, keap it going

    ja ne
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  • From ANON - compuwriter on April 08, 2004
    Horrible story. I'm not referring to your writing skills which are top notch. I mean the whole concept! Whoa! Gohan doing that to poor Goten, my favorite character.

    Great the way you showed how this can really happen. Jelousy, hate and resentment of a sibling and father.

    VERY, VERY graphic, but a great story. I hope you write more. You've got a great imagination.

    Tony :)
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  • From ANON - ben on February 02, 2004
    cool, but is this the end?
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  • From ANON - Skayda on August 11, 2003
    Wow. that was very powerful! I could feel Gohan's anger and poor Goten! to be the victim of his brother's rage like that! *cries* But a good read anyway!

    ~Ami
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