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Reviews for Silfrenel

By : KCbakeneko
  • From ANON - Kitanai Kodomo on August 20, 2003
    This is fantastic, absolu mag magnificent.

    I am familiar with your work, most recently 'Strange New World...' which must be one of my favourite GxVs, and the 'Legion of Terror' series. I also greatly enjoyed the truhan 'Sunset's Tide' ^_^

    As noted in 'Legion...' you have, as it appears, very carefully approached the opinions of the Z Fighers in regard to Vegeta, demonstrating how they feel about him living with and within them, their behaviour and how the two combine. This is done very efficiently and to a very likconcconclusion - I can very well see this as being what would actually happen in circumstance.

    Goku is handed well too - too many fics have I read where he cast off as the 'cute one' - puppy eyes and pleading to a cliched stony Vegeta and constantly apologising or being sickly-sweet. Way too OOC. Here you have accepted the fact he is, well, 'humane' - a person with equal degrees of negative and positive emotions, though always the less aggressive one in the relationship.

    Vegeta is also very successful - I am not sure whether I would categorise this and 'Legion...' as angst or drama - probably both. There is empathy for Vegeta, but the sympathy is not heaped on with a shovel which gives it credit and prevents the typical chiches of exploring Vegeta's past.

    *Shakes head* I apologise, I think my head's a little muddy. Anyway, I will be waiting with baited breath for the next chapter of this, and I'm afraid I am expecting the best :) I know you can deliver. Also, and not entirely off-topic, can we expect the next chapter of 'Strange New...' to come soon? It is a fantastic fiction, not only including my favourote pairing but also a setting on Vegeta-Sei, something I am fascinated with and of ideas I am whittling down for a possible fic of my own.

    Well, later days then, and thank you for the effort in your work. It certainly show
    Di
    Dirty ~
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  • From ANON - chibi-neko on August 19, 2003
    Great one-shot,your stories are something else!
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