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Reviews for Come bach to me, Come back to us

By : ArchNemesis
  • From ANON - SouritaBarton on April 20, 2004
    I really love this story. But I do have some complaints about it. You said Goku, Vegeta, Chi Chi, and Bulma are all 28, Trunks is 7, Goten is 8, and Gohan and Videl are 16. Well I have those ages have to be totally incorrect and impossible because that means Chi Chi and Goku were 12 when Gohan was born and 21 when Goten was born. It would also mean that Vegeta and Bulma were 20 when Trunks was born. Also everyone knows that Videl and Gohan don't meet until Gohan is 19. And another thing Goku met Chi Chi for the first time when he was 12 and they married when he was in his twenties and Bulma was a few years older than Goku when he met her for the first time. Please if you ever write another Dragon Ball Z story get all your ages and facts straight 'kay. Well other than that I really love this story. and I will read its sequel soon.
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  • From ANON - SouritaBarton on April 20, 2004
    I really love this story I've read it about 6 times. Well as I was reading it this time s iss is the 6th time I've read this story) I noticed you had Goku, Vegeta, Bulma, and Chi Chi all as 28 year olds Trunks as 8, Goten as 7, and Gohan and Videl as 16. Well I am wondering if you know that that would make Chi Chi and Goku 12 when Gohan was born and 21 when Goten was born. It would also make Vegeta and Bulma both 20 when Trunks was born. Also don't you know that Gohan was 19 when he met Videl and Goku was already 12 when he met Chi
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  • From ANON - Heather on January 31, 2004
    hello loved your story I have names for the twins if you want to use them in the sequel if not thats fine any way hears the names Yoha and Miysukai I just love these names coz you get to chose which one your using for the twins. if you do use the names I would like credit to there names. thank you ps can't wait for the sequal.
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  • From ANON - Anon on September 26, 2003
    OH MY GOD I JUST FOUND THIS FIC AND READ IT RIGHT THROUGH AT ONCE!!!!!!!!!THIS IS SOOOOOOO GOOOOD!!!!!PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!!!!I NEEEED MORE!!!^-^



    VCR
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  • From ANON - Borath on September 20, 2003
    I've only just become interested in this fandom, and this was one of the first fics I've read. Let me tell you, I've been as confused as hell through everything I've read so far, but I've enjoyed this fiction so much that I found that my lack of understanding didn't actually matter. I've come to adore Vegeta's character, and I do hope you continue to write him as attentively as you are now. There's not a lot more I can say than that. Brilliant fic. Please keep up the good work.

    Borath ;p
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  • From ANON - chibi-neko on September 13, 2003
    It seems that pain is never-ending for Vegeta....Anyway you are doing great,give us more!
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  • From ANON - chibi-neko on September 08, 2003
    Great story, hope to see more of it soon!!! by the way Veggie-chan pregnant is just too cuute!!!!!!!!!!
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