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August 24, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Great so far. I just have a question, in the second chapter, when Goku pins Bulma at the end, was that just in his mind or was that real? I hope you will write more to this story. :) I am a big fan for Goku/Bulma and Goku/Bra pairings, and would like to read what else happens from Goku pinning Bulma.
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January 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I love B/V/G hook ups please continue soon
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March 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I love this first chapter, especially your descriptions of Goku\'s sweat covered body! Veery sexy and incredibly written!
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March 8, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Please update if you can! I like this fic XD
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March 1, 2004 at 12:00 AM
You really write well. I hope you plan to continue this. your words are very discriptive you should write more storys :)
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December 17, 2003 at 12:00 AM
dis fic is great. i like that u put dat line from the series in. please update soon, can\'t wait for chapter 3! (i hope vegeta dussnt kill goku...oh wat am i saying goku\'s as good as dead)
-Haruhei =P (i really hope no one suffers serious damage)
-Haruhei =P (i really hope no one suffers serious damage)
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November 4, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 1 seemed a little slow but chapter two was good, if anything a little too short ^_^ I\'d love to see more of this fic!
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September 27, 2003 at 12:00 AM
WOW its really good so far..i love gokus character in this..should of known he was hiding all that deep down..hehe well anyways update soon ok..i cant wait for the next chapter!!
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September 2, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Hot! write more soon!
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September 2, 2003 at 12:00 AM
luv this story....\"marriage was a fucking food\" That was my favorite line. lol. very creative....I hope you continue