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That was not what I expected it to be it was sad when it said that they both died then it was funny when vegeta commented on his grave-stone and then soooo adorable and unforgetable at the end. That was so AWESOME!

Um, it's a nice story, but I think it's missing a chapter. one second were at the doctor passing out the next she's trying to revive 'geta. ??? when did he die?

what the hell?!!! so they faked thier deaths?!!! 0_O......that's the worst edning i've read.

pretty damn good

Kay, I really liked this until the last chapter. Who did it? Where did he take Goku? How the hell did Vegeta die? I mean, I can assume he faught to the death for Goku, but there weren't any mentions of wounds or anything. Basically all my questions can be summed up with "What the hell just happened?" I get how they got back at least.

the ending was a little bit of a let down, but all in all i thought the story was really good.

loved the story but the ending chapter just confused the hell out of me. i was just like huh what and had to reread it at least 3 times to fully get all of it. i mean did you just finally get fed up with the story an just said fuck it and lets end it as quick as possible. i mean it is a great story just that this last chapter could have been done better led us up to it allow us to be really able to grasp what was going to happen then pilling it on us in all one lump some. other wise good story

This is a great story so far, but I don\'t think that Yamcha is as innocent as he\'s portraying himself to be. I think that he got Puar to shapeshift into him in the hospital while he was out drugging Vegeta and raping Goku. It\'s either that, or he\'s learned Tien\'s technique w he he can split himself in two or three copies of himself.

Keep writing, I can\'t wait to find out what happens next!