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September 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Your first?! Well damn, that was well-written! Some typos here and there but no biggie. Very intense and so cute. Hott as well, can't forget about that! Vegeta was very cute at the end :)
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December 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I love it, a bit mushy, but that's ok sometimes. There were a few typos, though.
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July 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
AWESOME. This is going on my rec\'d reading list. :D
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February 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
this is by far one of My FAVS. Good Job Keep Writing
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December 18, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Wah! I loved it! @_@ Haven\'t read a good smut in a while! *bows down to it* And so cute too! ^_^ *dances* And some of Goku\'s lines cracked me up..I could SO see him thinking that!
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September 12, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Sweet and romantic
I love Vegeta and Goku fic\'s
They make the perfect couple,
the sex scene wasn\'t so graphic
(like all the other yaoi fic\'s i\'ve read)
I liked it and I loved the fic
Keep up the great yaoi work.
See Ya.
I love Vegeta and Goku fic\'s
They make the perfect couple,
the sex scene wasn\'t so graphic
(like all the other yaoi fic\'s i\'ve read)
I liked it and I loved the fic
Keep up the great yaoi work.
See Ya.