rate_review Reviews

This a great story with surprises and twists. Vegeta and Goku being my two most favorite characters
are the foundation DBZ. I think you did really well in creating different sides to your characters
and remained close to the actual characteristics of each character. The only regret is that the
writer never finished writing the story. I really would have enjoyed seeing how it all ended.

Great job so far. Please do more. I do hope that Vegeta and Gokuu make it to their mates in time.

Okay I know this is complete but I JUST HAD to say something. I really hope that Goku doesn't lose the baby. Not many women with children or without them understand the pain of losing an unborn child unless they have actually experienced it. I know I have had two miscarriages already and it is very painful, emotionally and physically. My frist child had no chance due to medical malpractice. My second and third(Twins) would still be with me(I just recently lost them) if it weren't for the fact that I was out of teh country I live in and had no medical access at that point in time. I ended up micarrying and havnig to have a C&D even at my advanced stage.(I was 7 months). It is not a common things but within my family it is more common then the entirety of the US. Most of the females in my family have had trouble concieveing, carrying, birthing, you name it anything to do with children bearing it runs in my family. Since I was so far along I like everyone else thought that I would not miscarry(that's what my doctor told me anyway even knowing my family history nor did my doctor do what should have been done, I was not on bed rest unfortnatly for my children unborn as they were) It is a very traumatic experience. It hurts to talk about and it often sets up a fear of getting pregnant and miscarrying again. My husband has been supportive and has said that when I am ready we can try again. We have our problems like any coupe but we also have ones that very few go through.Hopefully I dno't see any Goku Miscarrying. I get overtly emotoinal when the subject comes up. I read MPreg stories becasue I honestly think Men need to know how a woman feels during pregnancy and it lifts my spiruts to read abiout teh joy of birth. I can see it all in my head and it makes me happy and yet sa at the same time.
I certaintly look forward to reading more of you fics once I am done with this one. I am hoping that there will be sequels to some of them. Blood of a God? Fr some reason I remember it being longer.........
Oh well.
JA MATTE
Sakura
aka
Eternity

Okay so this fic isn;t complete. Why was I thinking it was? Hmm I 've no clue. Anyway Vegeta and Gokuu beter get to Goku and Vejita before they can harm Vegeta and Goku's child. As I stated in a previous chapter review. Losing a bay in any type of situation is hard. Whether it be through medical malpractice, miscarriage or in Goku's case possible murder of sadi unborn child or even having that child taken away from him by force such as what you are implying with your teaser for chapter 10. I know what it is like to lose a child(three actually) and it is heartbreaking and can cause some mothers to become depressed and even suicidal(I went teh suicidal route...ended up taking turns to fast in my car, flying down mountains and aaround twists and turns and on back roads. Ended up almsot flipping my car when i hit a pacth of lose gravel on a paved road. Luckily for me though my insticts of being born and raised in afamily of Race ar drivers took over and I kept going.)It is not something I would want to see happen to Goku. It could very well kill him especially as he is portrayed as a gentle being with a large heart and protective streak thiugh not as protective and vindictive as Vegeta is. Hope you update soon. Wish AFF had an alerts/subscriptions list like ff does.
Ja matte
Sakura
aka
Eternity

please continue

Hey you havent given up have you? dont stop now this thing is awesome and youv left it really open on where you could take it. Like I said beofre, the plotline your writting is goldust, not to be thrown in the trash can. Can other people please read and reveiw this?? I know your out there folks! encourage! encourage!! rock on.

Youv started updating the story again! exellent! Please dont say that your not going to finish this fic beacause youv really found a nitch when it comes to plotlines. On that note grats for snagging the Phantom of the Opera meets Beauty and the Beast theme, I hope loads of people read it, it deserves a big audience. ROCK ON!!!

Wonderful story, so glad you are continuing it.

Love the idea of 2 Vegeta's and 2 Goku's, very original, and then to have Cooler take a mis-matched pair was genius.

Nasty Cooler having Goku branded like a slave but interesting that the mark showed up on Vegeta too. Makes me wonder if Vegeta will feel other things that Cooler might do to him.

That spoiler made me shiver. Are they going to induce the baby? What a nasty way to give birth all strapped up and restrained.

why did you stop... :( this is a great story

Grate story I see that you have not update in two years. I hope that you have not given up on this stoyit too good to be left unfinish. I really would like to see how the rest of it plays out so please update soon.