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wow, great story ! Why happend you finish your other story about vegeta and goku ! i love that one too you are a great writer! weel i hope you get inspire soon and write!

Interesting, I find that I like this fic and am not cringing when they \"marked\" each other. I am enjoying the plot line and find that I am happily looking forward to the next chapter. UPDATE SOON!!!! I WANNA KNOW WHAT HAPPENS NEXT!

This story is very enjoyable! I look forward to future chapters. Three unleashed ssj4\'s? Koola is in for it.

[I\'m a single mother with two kids also...I\'ve only been reading yaoi for eight months..and i like mpregs too. G/V are my favorites...along with Gt/T. Hope the young one\'s are treating you well and congratulations. I wish mine were still that young.]


God bless,

~Anz~

a great but is kind of coufusing

Glad to have you back girl. Can\'t wait to see what happens. Congratulations on the baby and don\'t forget to tell your fans her name.

GAH! I love this fic! this has to be my favorite one. Jeez... you hardly have any reviews here... *sighs* those meanies... heh heh. nyways. I really enjoy reading this fic... i have read it many times... and i hope that you update soon. I\'m begging here! Update!! PLEASE!... well... whenever you get around to it of course. You\'re a very talented writer and your plots are so original! i love that! that is what gets me to read fics. I hope to read more of this soon... as you may have been able to tell. Thanks for reviewing Abhor- it means a lot! ^ ^

Agent 182

Great story. I\'m pretty new to ffn and affn, so I have only just come across this story, or I would have reviewed it sooner.

I hope that mirai Bulma finds someone to love, (anyone but Yamcha...not in this story...he\'s been a real shithead in this.) Either way, I kinda hate the thought that she\'s probably going to lose her Vejita. But I absolutely adore how protective and loving, Vegeta is being to poor sick Goku.

Being a hopeless romantic, I love the idea thegetegeta and Kakarot were actually destined to be mated, and that Vegeta actually held back when he realised that Goku had no memories of ever being Kakarot, and was married to boot. It gives a whole new insight into my adorable Prince.

I can\'t wait to see what happens next.

Great GREAT story so far and congrats on your second child! ^_^ Haha this time, chichi isnt the bad guy and shes actually helping. Its a nice change, though Im still no fan of hers. I cant wait for the next chappie! Good job! =o)

That was really good. This was my second attempt to finish this chapter. School sucks. Though, it is college meaning I actually chose to go here. Anyway, great chappie. Can\'t wait for the rest.

i think i\'ve read this before on fanfiction.net but i\'m reading it again cause it\'s really good, i love MPREG fics ^_^
i think Vegeta is soooo sweet looking after Goku ^-^
Can\'t wait for the next chap!