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for Fall Of The Mighty

by Rogue

person Ginia
schedule December 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
*taps foot* Even with your current insane schedule - I think a year is long enough between updates. *carefully hides her own unfinished fics* Please continue soon??

Love ya bunches!
Ginia
person AD
schedule January 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Vegeta in ruffles? For some reason I just can\'t see...

No, wait I can...

Thanks for the laugh, I really needed it. I look forward to seeing more of Spice. If she can\' get her uncle Vegy to loosen up like that, I can\'t wait to see what kind of knots she ties him and her grandpa into.


person Kira the Almighty
schedule August 13, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Write more or I will be forced to spank you!
person Kitanai Kodomo
schedule August 13, 2003 at 12:00 AM
*Snorts Vegetasquely*

I don\'t know, the two best charcters in DBZ, an actual plot that\'s both creative and enjoyable, two current excellent lemons, credible and thoughtful character development and an overall excellent, careful, descriptive writing style.

Finish it now and I\'ll hold it against you indefinitely.

~*~

Did I mention I\'m a sweet lovable pixie with the innocence of freshly borne snow? ^_^

It really is a great story, please keep it up!

Dirty ~
person Kira the Almighty
schedule August 1, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Another great chapter! If goku was snuggling up next to me the last thing I would be is docile!!!!! Yet another story of your I adore.

*Hands you a bag of fat free non tooth hurting but still hvae all the taste oreos*

hope ya feel better soon!
person the almighty Kira
schedule July 26, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I can never get enogh of those to goning at it! another great two chapters! I love the interaction with Vegeta and his Grandaughter, very in character for him! I know what you mean about, having a more \"sensitive\" significant other, but atleast mine is learning *rubs a few sore spots*
person Kira
schedule July 22, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Hell yes I would hunt you down if you ended it there! Iwant more! MORE! I presonally like the OOCness, no one likes one dimesnsional charactrers! It\'s why we right fanfiction!
person Kira
schedule July 3, 2003 at 12:00 AM
awwwww! so cute! I like you story I hope you right more chapters, not ot many people do stories like this!
person Spencers
schedule April 26, 2003 at 12:00 AM
This story is very good! And I will now go into a barrage of what I\'m sure everyone else has said before... ahem:

WRITE MORE NOW! PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE! AIEEEEE! I LOVE THIS STORY! *gasp* THIS IS SO GREAT!

Anyway. I love the tension you\'re building in not only the story, but betwen Goku and Vegeta as well. I really hope you update soon! Please, if you do, send me an email? Spencers13@yahoo.com. Thanks so much!

Take care till next time!
person jin
schedule December 5, 2002 at 12:00 AM
I *know* there is going to be more! Update!

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