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for Honor Thy Children

by vlg

person Onitsu
schedule April 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This...was....messed.....
oh man....oh god...
*sob*
That was intense. I have never heard the song before but I could imagine the
sombre melody that'd go with it.
Good job.
person Nekosune
schedule September 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*sniffle* I loved it! Cookies and pocky for you... you do angst really well.... *sniffle* I\'m gonna go cry now...
person One_Sick_Mind
schedule June 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow. That was a really good story, it incorporates with the message of the song very well...

You took some very serious issues and made them seem more... familiar by using characters that a lot of people know. I have a feeling that if you had made up your own characters, instead of making this a DBZ fic, very few people would have read it.

I thought about how I would react in the various situations... I think if I found out my husband raped my kid, I\'d tie him to the bed, use a soldering iron to burn \"I RAPED MY OWN CHILD\" into his chest/abdomen, and then moved to another state with my kid.
person animechick
schedule February 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
that was so intense but really good u should write mor chaps soon
person deepoet
schedule February 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*Grabs kleenex* This was soooo sad! *Sobs in tissue*
schedule January 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
man i have to review this one again. It is just so well written and so touching I couldn\'t help myself I had to read it again. You really should write more of these.
person Porphyria
schedule October 27, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Very sad, well-written songfic. I\'ve never heard that song, but the lyrics really make ya think..
person Jenny
schedule April 23, 2003 at 12:00 AM
This was such a sad story.

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