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December 28, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Ewww... I hate watersports, but the way you wrote this is just so erotic. You are a great author to take one of the four kinks I hate and have me enjoy it. I love where you started this fic off. You totally set the mood and a plausible explanation on why Gohan or Piccolo would even think of having watersports enter their future 'relationship', which I didn't think possible. I loved this story and I hope you continue this.
PLEASE ADD MORE!
PLEASE ADD MORE!
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February 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Ahh, people who don't like this can screw themselves! They were given fair warning and if they didn't know what 'watersports' were, then they had no business attempting to find out. Ahem...anyway, this was strange when I frist read it a few years back and it's a little wierd now. Probably because Gohan is a little boy and Piccolo peeing was about all he was interested in. Still, it was okay and I won't knock you, but if you really like that stuff, there should be older characters and better plots. Just saying...*shrug*
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February 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Um. Whoa.
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January 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Ah, I always love a good pissing story.
If you wrote more I'd definately read it.
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If you wrote more I'd definately read it.
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April 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This story is hot. I\'m serious. O_O I really really enjoyed that, unexpectedly. Thank you for writing it!
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February 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
i feel like a pervert. hell, i am. but damn it, i liked your story and i would read more if you wrote. i\'m female but i kinda understand... >.<
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December 2, 2003 at 12:00 AM
mmm! Pissing!
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October 13, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Uhm Okay ...I know most people are into different things..but you take the cake. This wasn\'t even well written. It was one long paragraph about Piccolo and Gohan pissing. This was just a horrid..horrid fic.
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September 25, 2003 at 12:00 AM
ok that was really disgusting. ok i think yaoi is ok and everything but no that just draws the line. im amazzed that ppl read this story and u wrote it. gross. so ja ne
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September 22, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Uh, yeah. That was kinda nasty! To the person above: At least you got through the first chapter. I barely read half of the first chapter it was so unappealing.