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January 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
//“Swallow Vegeta, swallow my seed, and you will never be able to go against me.”//
That's not porn. That's comedy. **CLAPS** Swallow my seed. You should can't write your way out of a paper bag. I couldn't read beyond this line because I hurt my side laughing. People must encourage you to keep going just for the shits and giggles. And they aren't laughing with you.
You might hate my reviews but you need to know the truth. Your fics are awful.
That's not porn. That's comedy. **CLAPS** Swallow my seed. You should can't write your way out of a paper bag. I couldn't read beyond this line because I hurt my side laughing. People must encourage you to keep going just for the shits and giggles. And they aren't laughing with you.
You might hate my reviews but you need to know the truth. Your fics are awful.
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September 28, 2003 at 12:00 AM
that was so sad! i nearly cried when vegeta got his balls cut off! i really liked the story. make a sequel!
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December 30, 2002 at 12:00 AM
That was awesome. unique. ah, i am lost at words, really. dare i hope of a sequel? maybe a resuce mission?