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March 8, 2004 at 12:00 AM
WOW! You are AMAZING! more soon please?
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March 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I absolutely positively love.
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March 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Its so good! your ch.8. pls, dont take too long to update. Break it down into smaller chapters if you must, just please dont take so long. Till next time, bye.
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March 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
More chapters please!
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March 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oooh - Evil Goku - Because he is bad, and I am a sick, twisted, individual...maybe he should make Vegeta his too...?
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March 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
great new chapter. That was so unexpected. Will you find a way to stop goku, or are you going to let him rape the kids?(I hope the second one). greatly done!
groetjes,
ben01
groetjes,
ben01
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March 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Good story. A biitt on the desturbing side but good none the less I can\'t wait to read more! Please hurry with the next chapter!!
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February 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hi there
Your story is AWESOME!!!!!!!!!!!! I love it! I love it! I wasn\'t a dragon ball fan, but you made me love it!
Just read your Seventh Chapter..... HOw dare you end like this? I want more! now! PLEASSSSSSSSSSSSEEEEEE!!!
^___________^ I\'m so nervous about what can happen... Ih! Ah! Oh!
Continue soon, please, You\'re the BESSSSSSSTTTTTT! YOU ROCK!
LOVE YOU!!!!!
Your story is AWESOME!!!!!!!!!!!! I love it! I love it! I wasn\'t a dragon ball fan, but you made me love it!
Just read your Seventh Chapter..... HOw dare you end like this? I want more! now! PLEASSSSSSSSSSSSEEEEEE!!!
^___________^ I\'m so nervous about what can happen... Ih! Ah! Oh!
Continue soon, please, You\'re the BESSSSSSSTTTTTT! YOU ROCK!
LOVE YOU!!!!!
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February 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
WHA!!!!! It was getting so good! You have to continue. I love the story. Goku is so wicked >=)
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February 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
You really pulled it off. I can\'t believe it. A story in which Goku rapes his son and gets him pregnant. Gohan keeps the baby, who turns out to be Goten, and raises it only to have a fufilling and loving relationship with Piccolo! Amazing! And then Goku comes back all crazy and proceeds to give juicy details about my beloved Vegeta\'s past life with Frieza! And it didn\'t feel forced or anything. You are amazing Jita. I love this fic. You rock so hard. And anyone who thinks otwas was is a complete ass. Okay, rant over. I can\'t wait for more.