rate_review Reviews

i love it. when is the next chapter coming out and when will duo have the baby

I didn\'t quite believe the number of chapters when I stumbled across this story in the latest added-section... 99 chapters, holy crap, was my first thought.
I must admit, I have never seen an episode of this anime in my life... but I do however seen some pictures... so I could get a mental image of the characters.
The sheer amount of words, emotiones and just about everything is just stunning. Amazing. An epic saga! I can truly say that this has been one of the most fantastic things I have ever written.
I will look forward to see how everything goes...
*goes off to fawn over this remarkble work of art!!*

*blushes*
Ooopss. Now look what you have done... you made my head a complete mush with this thing... \"\"\"I can truly say that this has been one of the most fantastic things I have ever written\"\"\"
What I meant was......I can truly say that this has been one of the most fantastic things I have ever have **read!!!*** Ok, so my English is not the best... especially when I\'m emotionally moved...

Hi Shen!!! I haven\'t had time to review lately but I just wanted you to know that I always enjoy this story very much (actually I enjoy all of your writing). I am looking forward to more. Hope all is well with you. Blessings to you, Solitaire

Wow...this is the cutest story ever! I just recently started reading it and have now read through it all and you have me totally spellbound. There truly is no other like it. And what I like more than anything is that you have obviously looked into every aspect of this before writing it in order to get it as good as possible. I don\'t normally enjoy male pregnancy stories because they either don\'t explain why the male is pregnant or don\'t have a good reason that would actually be something that could happen. This however has a very good backgroung and a reason as to how he got pregnant that could actually be possible, even though highly unlikely.

I also love how you don\'t make it all rosy red and just have everything go perfectly fine. You truly have a great story going here and I am really looking forward to reading the rest! :)

Thank you for the new chapter! Very funny and sweet. I read the review from \"Shru,\" but I can\'t say as I agree with the assessment there. I don\'t think things are moving too slowly. You\'re hitting on the major points of the pregnancy, and while of course you\'re going to focus on parts where something goes wrong, I think you\'re doing a great job of balancing those parts with times that things are going well. I think if you sped it up more, you would run the risk of making it sound like everything was going horribly, when it really seems to be more semi-isolated incidents.
Also, I know I\'m kind of freaking out over what\'s probably nothing, but I hope Miracle is okay. And I mean this as a compliment when I say that you\'re the only writer I know who could get me this worried over a *dog*, which isn\'t even a major part of the storyline.
Well, looking eagerly forward to the next installment!

you\'re not planning on covering every single day of the pregnancy are you? because this is a very slow moving fic and it would get very boring if you did that. Are you also planning to take this story beyond the pregnancy and birth? it would be interesting to see how the child would grow with parents of the same sex and what it would think once it learnt about sex and the like - maybe it would think it was adopted or something.... anyway, my point is just that i think that you should speed things up a bit - but otherwise i really think your story is great - very descriptive. oh! one more thing - i think Heero is just a tad too sensitive and ooc - he\'s letting go and handling emotions, yes, but i don\'t think he would cry so much and so often, if oyu know what i mean.... well keep writing - really enjoying your fic!

Awww... that was sweet. Keep up the good job!

Oh, wow. That\'s really the only printable version that I can come up with right now. Heero being so sweet and tender, taking such care. But I have to admit, through the entire lovemaking scene, in the back of my mind was \"Oh no oh no oh no oh no, Duo, you can\'t give chocolate to a dog, it\'s toxic!\" I\'m afraid Miracle\'s gonna need another one to last the night. And I\'m worried about Duo\'s reaction when he realizes what he\'s done. I mean, if he nearly kills the dog, is he going to worry about his ability to care for a kid? Well, as always, I look eagerly forward to the next chapter!

Cute, happy, exactly what I needed! Keep up the great job!