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by Deb

person Deb
schedule December 5, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Rachel; In response to your question.... I\'m afraid you will have to keep on reading the fic if you want an answer to that. :) To answer it here would be to give away part of the plot line, something I don\'t wish to do. As this fic progresses so more will be revealed, but thanks for your reply and I hope you continue to enjoy the fic.

*huggles*
ShenLong

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person black beauty
schedule December 5, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Hey, you never described how Wufei looks! Anyways, I still loved this chapter because of the tender and sweet Heero and Duo moments. Keep up the fantastic job and update soon.
person Rachel
schedule December 4, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Just a simple question here - if Duo\'s connection to his uterus is through his rectum, why doesn\'t he have chronic Pelvic Inflammatory Disease (PID)? The bacterial that are normal for the rectum are BAD anywhere else in the body. That\'s why vaginal sex immediately following anal sex without either changing the condom or thorough washing invariably results in a serious bacterial infection for the woman. Such an opening into the rectum would allow migration of the normal bacterial flora into the uterus (blood is obviously going the other way), and should cause Duo a LOT of ainalinal pain, fevers, swelling, etc.

Can you tell I work in the medical field? :) Just curious if this is one of those \"for the purpose of this story, believe this works\" things (I can do that), or if a plausible explanation is possible. I don\'t think so, but what do I know? It\'s not my story. :)

The story itself is very well-written, and you have an excellent grasp of the characters\' personalities and motivations. I look forward to reading the rest of it.

Keep up the good work!
person Terry Maxwell
schedule December 3, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Hi... this is my first review in this site... and its for you!!!!... Hehe... well i just want to tell you that i love the fic... really... its and interesting idea... Duo-chan being hermaphrodite... oh... its just great... ahhh* dreamy expresion* i love Duo... and i want to see all the pregnancy... and the PMS... oh my god.... i laugth becausa thats exactly how i treat my best friend when im in my days...

well

i hope to read more soon

See ya

Atte. Terry Maxwell
person VampireShinigami (not loged in)
schedule December 3, 2003 at 12:00 AM
All right! Perfect job..as usual. <_>
person Sessy
schedule December 2, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Hi I just thought I\'d leave you a little note saying I LOVE THIS STORY SOOO MUCH AND THANK YOU SOOOO MUCH FOR ALL THE WONDERFUL UPDATES!! YOU are my MOST FAVOURITE author of all time and I just LOVE ALL of your stories! Your the greatest!!!! Please continue to update as I eagerly await it ^^ I\'ll always LOVE your stories and can\'t get enough of them!! Thanks for being such a wonderful fantastic author!! Cheers!!! =^^=
person black beauty
schedule December 2, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Can\'t wait for the time to come until Duo is pregnant, I wonder how Heero will react? Wait how will Duo react? Oh you just had to add that bit of a teaser. LOL! Update soon keepkeep up the GREAT job. I will never get tired of writing that. LOL!
person black beauty
schedule November 30, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Ahhh! The pace that you are keeping, plus the added events that keep preveg thg the inevitable is too much. One of them has to figure it or find out soon. I guess you can tell a story is great when you can keep the readers on their toes and whining all the time. LOL! Keep up the great job and keep updating.
person VampireShinigami
schedule November 29, 2003 at 12:00 AM
GREAT!! MORE MORE!!
person leemax
schedule November 20, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Oh man that is real good. I love the way that Hilde let into Heero. OOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH more, more, more, want more. ^_^

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